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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.24

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 24
Language constraint is often a problem for people residing in foreign land. There are some people who believe language barriers can cause severe social and practical problems. In my opinion, unlike social problems, which are complex issues to tackle, practical problems are easily manageable. The major problem when people migrate in a foreign land is the racism that comes towards them. This is because people have a tendency to show apathy for anything that doesn’t identify with their own origins. For example, despite being a part of the same country, people of Terai region of Nepal who migrate to Hilly region often feel alienated because of language and cultural differences. They lack proper language mastery to co-operate on social activities and native people denigrate them because of this reason. On the other hand, to get through mundane life, one doesn’t need to be a virtuoso of foreign language. While mastering a language requires a lot of patience and effort, getting a grasp of the basic syntax is not as challenging. Within a day or two, people can develop language proficiency satisfactory enough to buy daily food and stuffs. Also, with the burgeoning of technology, language gap has reduced significantly. For instance, apps like google translate enable conversion of sentences from one language to other effortlessly. Hence, people are less likely to face practical problems as they used to before. To sum up, while social problems such as racism and discrimination still prevail because of language differences, managing practical aspects of life in a foreign language is relatively simple due to easy learning curve of basic syntax and advancing technology.
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constraint is
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often
a
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problem
for
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people
residing in
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foreign
land. There are
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some
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people
who believe
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language
barriers can cause severe
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social
and
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practical
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problems
. In my opinion, unlike
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social
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problems
, which are complex issues to tackle,
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practical
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problems
are
easily
manageable.

The major
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problem
when
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people
migrate in a
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foreign
land is the racism that
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comes
towards them. This is
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because
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people
have a tendency to
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show
apathy for anything that doesn’t identify with their
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own
origins.
For example
, despite being a part of the same country,
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people
of
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Terai
region of Nepal who migrate to Hilly region
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often
feel alienated
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because
of
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language
and cultural differences. They lack proper
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language
mastery to co-operate on
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social
activities and native
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people
denigrate them
because of this
reason.

On the other hand
, to
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get
through mundane life, one doesn’t need to be a virtuoso of
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foreign
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language
. While mastering a
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language
requires
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a lot of
patience and effort, getting a grasp of the basic syntax is not as challenging. Within a day or two,
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people
can develop
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language
proficiency satisfactory
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enough
to
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buy
daily food and stuffs.
Also
, with the burgeoning of technology,
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language
gap has
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reduced
significantly
.
For instance
, apps like
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google translate
enable conversion of sentences from one
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language
to other
effortlessly
.
Hence
,
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people
are less likely to face
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practical
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problems
as they
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used
to
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before
.

To sum up, while
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social
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problems
such as racism and discrimination
still
prevail
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because
of
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language
differences, managing
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practical
aspects of life in a
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foreign
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language
is
relatively
simple due to easy learning curve of basic syntax and advancing technology.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
38Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 24

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
269 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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