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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.22

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 22
Knowing a foreign language is inevitably important if an individual stays and travels overseas. Even after it is widely seen people face enormous social and practical obstacles to communicate with others in foreign countries. It is agreed that knowing a foreign language is significantly important to avoid various social and practical issues because it will create a communication barrier in many aspects of everyday lives. To begin with, social integration is a fundamental choice for an immigrant or a traveller. This integration will be smoother if an individual at least holds the beginner level of the local language skills. Moreover, lack of communication can make an individual isolated and frustrated in their stay in foreign countries. For example, an immigrant can not adopt a regular life if he did not know some basic knowledge of the language, this may include facing problems in using public transport, visiting a doctor or admitting the children in a local school. To accept this crucial fact, some countries like Canada offer free language learning for immigrant which ease their initial social integration easier. In addition, there are many practical problems could arise in everyday life if a person cannot communicate in a local language. For instance, hiring a taxi or ordering food in a restaurant is hardly difficult in countries like China and Russia. Nevertheless, the tech companies working rigorously to overcome those practical language problems which may ease the life of short term travellers. To conclude, the language has a significant impact on everyday lives. And, it can ease a lot of trivial and serious problems which can impact the overall satisfaction of an individual while his stay in an overseas country. I firmly believe, everybody should learn the basic level of the local language before travelling.
Knowing a
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foreign
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language
is
inevitably
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important
if an
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individual
stays and travels overseas. Even after it is
widely
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seen
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people
face enormous
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social
and
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practical
obstacles to communicate with others in
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foreign
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countries
. It is
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agreed
that knowing a
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foreign
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language
is
significantly
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important
to avoid various
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social
and
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practical
issues
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because
it will create a communication barrier in
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many
aspects of everyday
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lives
.

To
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begin
with,
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social
integration is a fundamental choice for an immigrant or a
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traveller
. This integration will be smoother if an
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individual
at least holds the beginner level of the
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local
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language
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skills
.
Moreover
, lack of communication can
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make
an
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individual
isolated and frustrated in their stay in
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foreign
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countries
.
For example
, an immigrant can not adopt a regular life if he did not know
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some
basic knowledge of the
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language
, this may include facing
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problems
in using public transport, visiting a doctor or admitting the children in a
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local
school. To accept this crucial fact,
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some
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countries
like Canada offer free
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language
learning for immigrant which
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ease
their initial
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social
integration easier.

In addition
, there are
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many
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practical
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problems
could arise in everyday life if a person cannot communicate in a
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local
language.

For instance
, hiring a taxi or ordering food in a restaurant is hardly difficult in
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countries
like China and Russia.
Nevertheless
, the tech
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companies
working
rigorously
to overcome those
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practical
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language
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problems
which may
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ease
the life of short term
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travellers
.

To conclude
, the
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language
has a significant impact on everyday
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lives
. And, it can
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ease
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a lot of
trivial and serious
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problems
which can impact the
overall
satisfaction of an
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individual
while his stay in an overseas
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country
. I
firmly
believe, everybody should learn the basic level of the
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local
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language
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before
travelling.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
37Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 22

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
294 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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