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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.20

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 20
These days, a lot of people are going overseas for many reasons such as study or working, thus language skill plays a vital role in their life. It is considered by some that being not able to speak a foreign language can cause serious problem in both social and practical difficulties. This essay will discuss despite the language barrier might be faced with some issues, but there are many advantages of living in a foreign country. On the one hand, if people migrate to another country, they will feel homesick and sense of isolation due to different culture, language, lifestyle and many other things. These factors make unfeasible to them in communicating with their new surroundings such as attending party and social events, and banter with his local friends. As a result, they will become lonely and get depression. Moreover, they have to struggle their life themselves. On the other hand, people living in oversea will be a chance to have a better quality of life as they will get a good job with high rate of salary and can save more money for their future. Furthermore, the individual will broaden their horizons and knowledge skills and improve their personal growth. Meeting with different people, ideas and places will allow them to improve their creativity and problem-solving skills. They can also learn to cope with not only foreign customs, but also traditional cuisines. And also, they will have a chance to learn and become influenced in host country language through everyday use. In conclusion, although living in foreign countries can face many serious problems, but better life quality and personal growth outweigh any negatives.
These days,
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a lot of
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people
are going overseas for
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many
reasons such as study or working,
thus
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language
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skill
plays a vital role in their
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life
. It
is considered
by
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some
that being not able to speak a
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foreign
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language
can cause serious problem in both social and practical difficulties. This essay will discuss despite the
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language
barrier might
be faced
with
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some
issues,
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but
there are
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many
advantages of living in a
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foreign
country.

On the one hand, if
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people
migrate to another country, they will feel homesick and sense of isolation due to
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different
culture,
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language
, lifestyle and
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many
other things. These factors
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make
unfeasible to them in communicating with their new surroundings such as attending party and social
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events
, and banter with his local friends.
As a result
, they will become lonely and
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get
depression.
Moreover
, they
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have to
struggle their
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life
themselves.

On the other hand
,
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people
living in oversea will be a chance to have a better quality of
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life
as they will
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get
a
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good
job with high rate of salary and can save more money for their future.
Furthermore
, the individual will broaden their horizons and knowledge
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skills
and
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improve
their personal growth. Meeting with
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different
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people
,
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ideas
and places will
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allow
them to
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improve
their creativity and problem-solving
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skills
. They can
also
learn to cope with not
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only
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foreign
customs,
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but
also
traditional cuisines. And
also
, they will have a chance to learn and become influenced in host country
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language
through everyday
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use
.

In conclusion
, although living in
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foreign
countries can face
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many
serious problems,
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but
better
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life
quality and personal growth outweigh any negatives.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 20

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
274 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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