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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement. v.18

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement. v. 18
Some people think that staying in a country where you ought to speak a foreign language will probably result in extreme problems. I agree that the language barrier can be hard to break, resulting in practical life difficulties along with social constraints. For people living in a non-native country communicating with a foreign language, may put them in life-threatening situations. If some people are unable to express their worries and thoughts, it can destabilize their stability. Take a foreign patient, for example, who find it hard to describe how he feels, obstructing doctors from finding out his medical issue. As a result, the patient's life will be in a critical situation that caused by bad interpretation. Moreover, some words are written in the same way but have different meanings, since a lack of awareness that could result in complications. Immigrants could struggle because of poor language connection. Arguably, individuals that travel to improve their language skills will possibly benefit from speaking with native speakers. However, they may be faced with rejections from society. For example, an employee could prevent a worker from his promotion because of having a bad accent. Furthermore, Assuming that the language barrier will opaque the employer work. In addition to discrimination at work due to language barrier, getting behind in studies may be inevitable to immigrant students. For instance, not being able to understand effectively scientific subjects in a foreign language will put them under pressure. Consequently, their language level will not be improved. In conclusion, I believe that, ultimately, many emotional and social problems will target people who cannot profoundly express themselves in a language other than their mother tongue. People should be aware of the consequences of having to speak a foreign language.
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think
that staying in a country where you ought to speak a
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foreign
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language
will
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agree
that the
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barrier can be
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hard
to break, resulting in practical life difficulties along with social constraints.

For
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people
living in a non-native country communicating with a
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foreign
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language
, may put them in life-threatening situations. If
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some
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people
are unable to express their worries and thoughts, it can destabilize their stability. Take a
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foreign
patient,
for example
, who find it
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hard
to
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describe
how he feels, obstructing doctors from finding out his medical issue.
As a result
, the patient's life will be in a critical situation that caused by
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bad
interpretation.
Moreover
,
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some
words
are written
in the same way
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but
have
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different
meanings, since a lack of awareness that could result in complications.

Immigrants could struggle
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because
of poor
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language
connection.
Arguably
, individuals that travel to
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improve
their
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language
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skills
will
possibly
benefit from speaking with native speakers.
However
, they may
be faced
with rejections from society.
For example
, an employee could
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prevent
a worker from his promotion
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because
of having a
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bad
accent.
Furthermore
, Assuming that the
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language
barrier will opaque the employer work.
In addition
to discrimination at work due to
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language
barrier, getting behind in studies may be inevitable to immigrant students.
For instance
, not being able to understand
effectively
scientific subjects in a
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foreign
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language
will put them under pressure.
Consequently
, their
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language
level will not be
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improved
.

In conclusion
, I believe that,
ultimately
,
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many
emotional and social problems will target
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people
who cannot
profoundly
express themselves in a
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language
other than their mother tongue.

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People
should be aware of the consequences of having to speak a
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foreign
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language
.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement. v. 18

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
289 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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