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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.17

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 17
Moving to a new country to start a new life is definitely a big step to take, especially for those who are not able to speak the local language. While I agree that this inability would cause some practical problems, I still think it will not bring about a serious social issue. Firstly, people nowadays are quite more open-minded regarding foreigners so it is probable that they will attempt to understand what they are trying to convey. With the current technology that the world has right now, people can make use of language applications designed to help break language barriers so somehow, this can overcome any miscommunication. Secondly, most countries adopt a common language like English, so more often than not, a foreigner will meet someone who can communicate with him or her; therefore reducing the problems that he or she might encounter. However, one social problem that could occur because of this language barrier is that these foreigners might be isolated by the locals because of their differences. Some locals do not try to socialize with an outsider once they know that he can not speak their language. Some would even automatically avoid them because they already assumed that because they are from another country, they only know their own native language. Nevertheless, this is not always the case since we are now living in a highly-globalized society and many countries are actually very accommodating to visitors and migrants alike. In conclusion, I agree that the inability to communicate using the locals' language will probably cause misunderstandings, however these problems will not always result to serious consequences.
Moving to a new
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country
to
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start
a new life is definitely a
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big
step to take,
especially
for those who are not able to speak the local
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language
. While I
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agree
that this inability would cause
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some
practical
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problems
, I
still
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think
it will not bring about a serious social issue.

Firstly
,
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people
nowadays are quite more open-minded regarding foreigners
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so
it is probable that they will attempt to understand what they are trying to convey. With the
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current
technology that the world has right
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now
,
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people
can
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make
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use
of
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language
applications designed to
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help
break
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language
barriers
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so
somehow, this can overcome any miscommunication.
Secondly
, most
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countries
adopt a common
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language
like English,
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so
more
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often
than not, a foreigner will
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meet
someone who can communicate with him or her;
therefore
reducing the
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problems
that he or she might encounter.

However
, one social
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problem
that could occur
because of this
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language
barrier is that these foreigners might
be isolated
by the locals
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because
of their differences.
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Some
locals do not try to socialize with an outsider once they know that he can not speak their
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language
.
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Some
would even
automatically
avoid them
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because
they already assumed that
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because
they are from another
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country
, they
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only
know their
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own
native
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language
.
Nevertheless
, this is not always the case since we are
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now
living in a
highly
-globalized society and
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many
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countries
are actually
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very
accommodating to visitors and migrants alike.

In conclusion
, I
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agree
that the inability to communicate using the locals'
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language
will
probably
cause misunderstandings,
however
these
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problems
will not always result to serious consequences.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 17

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
268 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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