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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? v.16

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with the statement? v. 16
Living in a foreign country has both benefits and drawbacks. Even though it might create some problems or discomforts initially, the fact that it has serious social and practical issues is totally disagreeable. Language, which is the means of communication between two people cannot create any problems if it is used in a proper way. To embark with the discussion, a majority of the people moving to a foreign country have a long term purpose such as higher education, job etc. For which they prepare themselves in prior to get adapted to the new environment fast. In the initial phase, they might face some issue in finding friends or to have a free move in the new society. But once they get into the flow, it will be easier for them to learn new culture, society, people etc. Every individual who plans to go to a foreign country have prior preparations, planning such that they can survive better in the early stages. Accordingly, some European countries or non-native English countries, make it mandatory for foreign people learn their language if they visit for a long term purpose. These things ease them in every aspect and avoid unnecessary chaos with people belonging to a different culture and society. Apart from learning about society, culture, etc. People get to know about various aspects of life practically. This will surely help them in their upcoming days to face a problem or any critical situation fearlessly. As people think that language is a big barrier, I feel that one can learn any language fast through continuous learning and practice. Also, some study shows that learning different languages improves the activity of the brain too. Thus, I totally believe and agree that moving to a foreign country will not push any individual into serious problems unless they handle it in a wrong way.
Living in a
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foreign
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country
has both benefits and drawbacks.
Even though
it might create
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some
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problems
or discomforts
initially
, the fact that it has serious social and practical issues is
totally
disagreeable.
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Language
, which is the means of communication between two
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people
cannot create any
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problems
if it is
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used
Consider replacing "in a proper way" with the adverb for "proper"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a proper way
.

To embark with the discussion, a majority of the
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people
moving to a
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foreign
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country
have a long term purpose such as higher education, job etc. For which they prepare themselves in prior to
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get
adapted to the new environment
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fast
. In the initial phase, they might face
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some
issue in finding friends or to have a free
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move
in the new society.
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But
once they
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get
into the flow, it will be easier for them to learn new culture, society,
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people
etc.

Every individual who plans to go to a
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foreign
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country
have prior preparations, planning such that they can survive better in the early stages.
Accordingly
,
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some
European
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countries
or non-native English
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countries
,
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make
it mandatory for
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foreign
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people
learn their
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language
if they visit for a long term purpose. These things
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ease
them in every aspect and avoid unnecessary chaos with
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people
belonging to a
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different
culture and society.

Apart from learning about society, culture, etc.
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People
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get
to know about various aspects of life
practically
. This will
surely
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help
them in their upcoming days to face a
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problem
or any critical situation
fearlessly
. As
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people
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think
that
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language
is a
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big
barrier, I feel that one can learn any
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language
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fast
through continuous learning and practice.
Also
,
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some
study
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shows
that learning
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different
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languages
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improves
the activity of the brain too.
Thus
, I
totally
believe and
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agree
that moving to a
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foreign
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country
will not push any individual into serious
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problems
unless they handle it in a
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wrong
way.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with the statement? v. 16

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
308 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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