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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.14

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 14
Migrating to a country where we should use a non-native language may cause a lot of practical and social problems, I completely agree with this statement. The two main problems which we get are lack of communication between our neighbours and difficulty in learning a new language. Firstly, communication is the most predominant one which everyone needs. When we shift to a new country or a state the first problem which we face is lack of communication. As the language is different and you are not familiar with the language there might be some problem while you try to express your thoughts. There are a lot of chances of people misunderstanding your words and you may not get what you expect from them as a reply. The Times conducted a recent survey on migration and it shows that on a yearly basis, there are more than ten thousand people who are struggling without knowing the native language of the country where they migrate. Secondly, to avoid that miscommunication, people are trying to learn the native voice. It’s not a piece of cake to learn a new wording in a very short time. So there are a lot of hardships which people face while trying to learn the native speech. We have to spend our leisure time in learning the native tongue. The Hindu an Indian newspaper says that, “it’s very difficult for people to learn and practice new sound and half of the people who migrated to India find it very difficult”. To conclude, there are a lot of barriers in migrating from one country to an another country. However, if people are both physically (in terms of climatic change) and mentally (in terms of language) prepared they could survive and live their life happily in the new country.
Migrating to a
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country
where we should
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use
a non-native
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language
may cause a
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lot
of practical and social
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problems
, I completely
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agree
with this statement. The two main
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problems
which we
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get
are lack of communication between our
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neighbours
and difficulty in learning a
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new
language.

Firstly
, communication is the most predominant one which everyone needs. When we shift to a
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new
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country
or a state the
first
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problem
which we face is lack of communication. As the
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language
is
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different
and you are not familiar with the
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language
there might be
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some
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problem
while you try to express your thoughts. There are a
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lot
of chances of
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people
misunderstanding your words and you may not
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get
what you
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expect
from them as a reply. The Times conducted a recent survey on migration and it
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shows
that on a yearly basis, there are more than ten thousand
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people
who are struggling without knowing the
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native
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language
of the
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country
where they migrate.

Secondly
, to avoid that miscommunication,
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people
are trying to
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learn
the
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native
voice. It’s not a piece of cake to
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learn
a
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new
wording in a
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very
short time.
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So
there are a
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lot
of hardships which
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people
face while trying to
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learn
the
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native
speech. We
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have to
spend our leisure time in learning the
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native
tongue. The Hindu an Indian newspaper says that, “it’s
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very
difficult for
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people
to
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learn
and practice
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new
sound and half of the
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people
who migrated to India find it
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very
difficult”.

To conclude
, there are a
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lot
of barriers in migrating from one
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country
to an another
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country
.
However
, if
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people
are both
physically
(in terms of climatic
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change
) and mentally (in terms of
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language)
prepared they could survive and
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live
their life
happily
in the
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new
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country
.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
39Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
The joy of knowing a foreign language is inexpressible. I find it really difficult to express such joy in my mother tongue.
Munia Khan

IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 14

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
299 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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