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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.13

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 13
There has been an untold number of debates about living somewhere that we are not familiar with its language among various walks of life. Many poeple think it would cause lots of difficulties. In my opinion, living under this circumstance may lead to have some problems, however, there has been a paradigm shift in technology and lifestyles which help poeple to figure out with this situation easily. On the one hand, there is no doubt that living under the situation that we are unfamiliar with the language would not be easy at all. That is more to say, this is the language that plays a fundamental role in people communication and when you are not able to have a relationship with others, you would face lots of problems. For instance, recent research in Canada elucidates the fact that most of poeple that cannot understand English, seem unaware about Canada's rules and this unknowing cause lots of trouble for them. Looking at the other side of the coin, it is new technology that makes it more convenient to adopt with living in where with new language. To put it differently, the lifestyle has been changing dramatically on the basis of system application that make it easier to connect with other poeple without knowing language. For example, there is a free application that you install on your mobile phone. The pivotal point about this software is, it can translate more than 20 languages to others fast and correctly. So, the more communication people can establish, the less difficulties they may face. I think, although living in a country with various language may be hard and cause difficulties, it can be tackled by using new technology that makes relationships easier. To conclude, there are valid arguments on both sides of the controversy. On balance, however living in the countries with different language would not be simple, the significant improvement in new technology may lead to remove the language obstacle.
There has been an untold number of debates about
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living
somewhere that we are not familiar with its
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language
among various walks of life.
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poeple
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think
it would cause lots of difficulties. In my opinion,
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living
under this circumstance may lead to have
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some
problems,
however
, there has been a paradigm shift in
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technology
and lifestyles which
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help
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poeple
to figure out with this situation
easily
.

On the one hand, there is no doubt that
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living
under the situation that we are unfamiliar with the
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language
would not be easy at all.
That is
more to say, this is the
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language
that plays a fundamental role in
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people
communication and when you are not able to have a relationship with others, you would face lots of problems.
For instance
, recent research in Canada elucidates the fact that most of
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poeple
that cannot understand English, seem unaware about Canada's
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rules
and this unknowing cause lots of trouble for them.

Looking at the
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other
side of the coin, it is
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new
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technology
that
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makes
it more convenient to adopt with
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living
in where with
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new
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language
. To put it
differently
, the lifestyle has been changing
dramatically
on the basis of system application that
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make
it easier to connect with
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other
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poeple
without knowing
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language
.
For example
, there is a free application that you install on your mobile phone. The pivotal point about this software is, it can translate more than 20
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languages
to others
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fast
and
correctly
.
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, the more communication
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people
can establish, the
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less
difficulties they may face. I
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, although
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living
in a country with various
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language
may be
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hard
and cause difficulties, it can
be tackled
by using
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new
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technology
that
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makes
relationships easier.

To conclude
, there are valid arguments on both sides of the controversy. On balance,
however
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living
in the countries with
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different
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language
would not be simple, the significant improvement in
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new
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technology
may lead to remove the
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language
obstacle.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
25Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 13

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
326 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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