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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.11

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 11
Nowadays, the language barrier is a factor in social problem for people living abroad to face. Some people have argued that speaking a second language has caused the social issue in many countries. In my opinion, I only practically agree because foreign language has a problem with religious, but there is some reason that can reduce the practical issue at present. On the on hand, the one main reason is misunderstanding in communication with language or culture because each country has a different language and different culture which can happened in everyone, insulting about skin color, ethnicity or appearance. For instance, some have a migrate to a foreign country and poor ability of speaking a foreign language. As a result, they cannot communicate with other people such as make new friends, find a career or learn new experience. This is lead to discriminate, violence or unemployment for them. On the other hand, there are more advance technology that can reduce issue in social problem because technology has developed to convenient for people such as computer, smartphone or artificial intelligence. It helps people to learn new experiences and understand in a foreign language, decreasing the problem in society as more or less. To illustrate, smartphone has some applications to translate into language around the world as a Thai, Japanese, Chinese or other languages, which can become easily and makes it easier to understand with conversation and reduce in racism or bully. To conclude, I would say that speaking a foreign language is only partly in the issue from misunderstand. However, technology can help to communicate to comfortable and social problem can bring down in discriminate, violence or unemployment.
Nowadays, the
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barrier is a factor in
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for
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living abroad to face.
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people
have argued that speaking a second
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has caused the
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social
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issue
in
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countries. In my opinion, I
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agree
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has a
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with religious,
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there is
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reason that can
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at present.

On the on hand, the one main reason is misunderstanding in communication with
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language
or culture
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each country has a
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different
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language
and
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culture which can happened in everyone, insulting about skin color, ethnicity or appearance.
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a migrate
to a
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country and poor ability of speaking a
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.
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, they cannot communicate with other
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such as
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new friends, find a career or learn new experience. This is lead to discriminate, violence or unemployment for them.

On the other hand
, there are more advance technology that can
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in
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people
such as computer, smartphone or artificial intelligence. It
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helps
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people
to learn new experiences and understand in a
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foreign
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language
, decreasing the
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problem
in society as more or less. To illustrate, smartphone has
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some
applications to translate into
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language
around the world as a Thai, Japanese, Chinese or other
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languages
, which can become
easily
and
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makes
it easier to understand with conversation and
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reduce
in racism or bully.

To conclude
, I would say that speaking a
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foreign
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is
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only
partly in the
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issue
from misunderstand.
However
, technology can
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help
to communicate to comfortable and
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social
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problem
can bring down in discriminate, violence or unemployment.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
33Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 11

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
277 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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