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every year several languages dies out, some people think that this is not important because; life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. to what extend do you agree or disagree v.1

every year several languages dies out, some people think that this is not important because; life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. v. 1
It is true that so many languages across the world makes it difficult to interact. However, we have also seen how the popularity of English as the main language has grown among the youngsters, making communication easy. I do not believe that fewer languages in the world will make our life easy. People with differing native style can still connect to each other based on the tone of speaking. For example, humans with animals or our pets. We don't understand their words, however, we still know when they're happy, sad or in pain. The case is with the babies. We understand when they are crying because of hunger, sleep or pain. Language is a way of expressing your feelings and views in words. Across our globe, there are more than 100 languages and its subsets. Every country, state or region has a different dialect and accent, signifying their culture, beliefs and values. This unintentionally, separates every individual from the other. We don't realize that every day, we meet so many people from different background and varying style of speaking. The diversification is a beautiful way to look how we all our so distinct, yet so connected to each other. Language does create barriers for people to communicate or connect however, it also gives us a chance to learn something new. It opens a window for us to understand the concept of socialization and polish ourselves to associate with other ideologies. In conclusion, we should feel blessed to be a part of a civilization where we have the fortune to acquire diversified edification. We should cherish this variation and preserve it for our future generations.
It is true that
so
many
languages
across the world
makes
it difficult to interact.
However
, we have
also
seen
how the popularity of English as the main
language
has grown among the youngsters, making communication easy.

I do not believe that fewer
languages
in the world will
make
our life easy.
People
with differing native style can
still
connect to each other based on the tone of speaking.

For example
, humans with animals or our pets. We don't understand their words,
however
, we
still
know when they're happy, sad or in pain. The case is with the babies. We understand when they are crying
because
of hunger, sleep or pain.

Language is a way of expressing your feelings and views in words. Across our globe, there are more than 100
languages
and its subsets. Every country, state or region has a
different
dialect and accent, signifying their culture, beliefs and values.

This
unintentionally
, separates every individual from the other. We don't realize that every day, we
meet
so
many
people
from
different
background and varying style of speaking. The diversification is a
beautiful
way to look how we all our
so
distinct,
yet
so
connected to each other.

Language does create barriers for
people
to communicate or connect
however
, it
also
gives us a chance to learn something new. It opens a window for us to understand the concept of socialization and polish ourselves to associate with other ideologies.

In conclusion
, we should feel blessed to be a part of a civilization where we have the fortune to acquire diversified edification. We should cherish this variation and preserve it for our future generations.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS essay every year several languages dies out, some people think that this is not important because; life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. v. 1

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
274 words
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