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Every year several languages die out Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion v.3

Every year several languages die out Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world with this opinion v. 3
Language is the vital element of communication. There are different kinds of language exist in the world. However, many of them are vanishing every year. Many people consider this as a normal issue because it will enhance smooth communication and life will become easier than before. From my point of view, language diversity has a lot of benefits for the individuals as well as the society. Language contains the cultural elements. If we research a particular language, we can find thousands of information regarding a particular nation. It also tells us the history of that nation. Language also gives us a emotional sense of feeling. For instance, as a Bangladeshi nation we fought for our language and we earned it. When ever we listen, read, and write anything in Bangla, we feel very proud and happy. Languages also tell us the behavioral pattern of a particular nation. There for, whenever we visit a country, we can learn how they behave through language. Recently there are many ancient documents found which contains myths and other incident taken place in the ancient history. Language help us to identify the meaning of those elements. On the opposite, some people think that the fewer the number of languages, the smoother the communication will be. Nowadays globalization made the world smaller. Many people move from one country to another for educational, business and for many other purposes. If they can use common language, the communication barrier will be minimized. Some people also believe that it will smooth the official activities. People who travel in different countries, they will not face any problem and for these reasons many people do not consider language extinction as a serious problem. In conclusion, it can be said that although having some merits, language extinction is a threat for the culture. This is because through language we can learn about many other cultures and increase our knowledge level.
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Language
is the vital element of
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communication
. There are
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different
kinds of
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language
exist in the world.
However
,
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many
of them are vanishing every year.
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Many
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people
consider this as a normal issue
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because
it will enhance smooth
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communication
and life will become easier than
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before
. From my point of view,
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language
diversity has
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a lot of
benefits for the individuals
as well
as the society.

Language contains the cultural elements. If we research a particular
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language
, we can find thousands of information regarding a particular
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nation
. It
also
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tells
us the history of that
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nation
.
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Language
also
gives us
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a
emotional sense of feeling.
For instance
, as a Bangladeshi
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nation
we fought for our
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language and
we earned it. When ever we listen, read, and write anything in
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Bangla
, we feel
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very
proud and happy.
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Languages
also
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tell
us the behavioral pattern of a particular
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nation
. There for, whenever we visit a country, we can learn how they behave through
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language
. Recently there are
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many
ancient documents found which contains myths and other incident taken place in the ancient history.
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Language
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help
us to identify the meaning of those elements.

On the opposite,
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some
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people
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think
that the fewer the number of
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languages
, the smoother the
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communication
will be. Nowadays globalization made the world smaller.
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Many
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people
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move
from one country to another for educational, business and for
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many
other purposes. If they can
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use
common
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language
, the
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communication
barrier will
be minimized
.
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Some
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people
also
believe that it will smooth the official activities.
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People
who travel in
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different
countries, they will not face any problem and for these reasons
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many
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people
do not consider
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language
extinction as a serious problem.

In conclusion
, it can
be said
that although having
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some
merits,
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language
extinction is a threat for the culture. This is
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because
through
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language
we can learn about
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many
other cultures and increase our knowledge level.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
28Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Every year several languages die out Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world with this opinion v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
318 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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