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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? v.4

Every year several languages die out. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. with this opinion? v. 4
Nowadays, there are over two hundred countries in the world with their own languages. However, many languages are disappearing. Some people believe that the life is better if the world exists some standard languages. In my opinion, I completely agree with this point of view. In this essay, I am going to shed some lights on my opinion. There are several reasons that some languages die out. We can see that the popularity of language is the most important things to maintain lingual. If a country has about 200 thousand people and uses their own language to communicate with other countries, it could be impossible to exchange culture with the rest of the world without using the same language. That is the first reason leading to disappear traditional language. In addition, the difficulty of learning language is the second reason that leads to die out of lingual. For example, people want to use a new language for communicate, they must learn at least 10 years for proficient. It will limit the number of people who want to approach this country and bring it more popular. In my view, the world is becoming globalize. It is easier to connect with other countries through few standard languages. When children were born, they may study about two or three languages and could explore the world. In my case, for instance, if I go to China, Vietnam, I could use English to communicate and understand this country instead of leaning Chinese, Vietnamese. To clear this point, these countries use the same language that is the best way to attract tourists over the world and develops economic significant. In conclusion, I truly believe that these ideas are the essential consideration to build a better world. The life is more convenient and developed if we use few languages and same vision. We should not make the life more complicated than it needs to be.
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languages
are disappearing.
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people
believe that the life is better if the
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world
exists
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standard
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languages
. In my opinion, I completely
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agree
with this point of view. In this essay, I am going to shed
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some
lights on my opinion.

There are several reasons that
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languages
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die
out. We can
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see
that the popularity of
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language
is the most
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important
things to maintain lingual. If a
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country
has about 200 thousand
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people
and
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uses
their
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own
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language
to communicate with other
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countries
, it could be impossible to exchange culture with the rest of the
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world
without using the same
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language
.
That is
the
first
reason leading to disappear traditional
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language
.
In addition
, the difficulty of learning
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language
is the second reason that leads to
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die
out of lingual.
For example
,
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people
want to
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use
a new
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language
for communicate, they
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must
learn at least 10 years for proficient. It will limit the number of
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people
who want to approach this
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country
and bring it more popular.

In my view, the
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world
is becoming globalize. It is easier to connect with other
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countries
through few standard
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languages
. When children
were born
, they may study about two or three
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languages
and could explore the
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world
. In my case,
for instance
, if I go to China, Vietnam, I could
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use
English to communicate and understand this
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country
instead
of leaning Chinese, Vietnamese. To
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clear
this point, these
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countries
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use
the same
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language
that is
the best way to attract tourists over the
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world
and develops economic significant.

In conclusion
, I
truly
believe that these
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ideas
are the essential consideration to build a better
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world
. The life is more convenient and developed if we
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use
few
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languages
and same vision. We should not
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make
the life more complicated than it needs to be.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Every year several languages die out. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. with this opinion? v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
318 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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