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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? v.28

Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. with this opinion? v. 28
There are more than ten thousand different linguists around the world. I believe that the world may be benefitted with less languages, while I agree that they represent heritage of a nation should be preserved. There are some advantages of speaking fewer language. Firstly, there may be minimum difficulty in understanding each other. As a result, the flow of trade will be smooth across the border and businesses will flourish, further accelerating globalisation. There will be a few hurdles for a local trader to expand globally. For instance, In India, there are more than a thousand local languages, which may act as a barrier for international businesses to promote their products, hence with a limited dialect it will be convenient for investor to communicate and understand the needs of the people. Secondly, it may boost immigration. In other words, one of the main problems of migration is to understand the words spoken by local people, which can be mitigated with limited dialect. On the other hand, many ancient linguistic spoken globally has their own history and tradition attached to it which are followed for decades. This means that with extinction of it, many cultures will also be forgotten. Furthermore, many new words are derived from old literature. For example, many of the English words, spoken across the border, are derived from Sanskrit, which is not slowly phasing out from the world. In conclusion, although development is an important factor for people to succeed and have a better future, it should not be achieved by compromising the ancient language which reflects the genesis of humankind.
There are more than ten thousand
different
linguists around the world. I believe that the world may be
benefitted
with
less
languages
, while I
agree
that they represent heritage of a nation should
be preserved
.

There are
some
advantages of speaking fewer
language
.
Firstly
, there may be minimum difficulty in understanding each other.
As a result
, the flow of trade will be smooth across the border and businesses will flourish,
further
accelerating
globalisation
. There will be a few hurdles for a local trader to expand globally.
For instance
, In India, there are more than a thousand local
languages
, which may act as a barrier for international businesses to promote their products,
hence
with a limited dialect it will be convenient for investor to communicate and understand the needs of the
people
.
Secondly
, it may boost immigration.
In other words
, one of the main problems of migration is to understand the words spoken by local
people
, which can
be mitigated
with limited dialect.

On the other hand
,
many
ancient linguistic spoken globally has their
own
history and tradition attached to it which
are followed
for decades. This means that with extinction of it,
many
cultures will
also
be forgotten
.
Furthermore
,
many
new words
are derived
from
old
literature.
For example
,
many
of the English words, spoken across the border,
are derived
from Sanskrit, which is not
slowly
phasing out from the world.

In conclusion
, although development is an
important
factor for
people
to succeed and have a better future, it should not
be achieved
by compromising the ancient
language
which reflects the genesis of humankind.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. with this opinion? v. 28

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
264 words
8.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
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Lexical Resource: 8.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
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