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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion v.26

Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. with this opinion v. 26
As the global trend toward globalism and the use of a lingua Franca grows, local languages continue to perish. I think, although a smaller number of languages can make life easier, it is important to try and preserve all languages. On the one hand, when fewer languages are in use, communication tends to become easier in most cases. It will be really convenient if one can talk with others from various parts of the world without the need for a live translator or special software for assistance. This means that different nations around the globe are likely to be able to cooperate more closely if fewer languages are in use. For instance, a conference at the United Nations will be more convenient and productive for politicians if they all can communicate using a limited set of languages, or perhaps even one, instead of having to wait for translations to come through. Consequently, better results are likely to be achieved more quickly, and many issues could be resolved as a result of better mutual understanding. On the other hand, every language represents the culture within which it has developed. It reflects the lifestyle and traditions of the people who use it to communicate within the context of their daily lives, and it is the foundation of their folklore and literature. Although some might argue that these could be translated into more common languages like English or Chinese, it is quite unlikely that the exact meaning of each phrase, expression, idiom, proverb or poem can be translated. This means that once a nations’ language has died out, a significant portion of its culture and history is lost with it, leaving them with a weaker cultural and national identity. In conclusion, I believe even though the fall in the number of languages in use allows people to communicate more conveniently, making their lives less complicated, it is still important for every language to be saved from extinction so that the culture, history and literature of all nations are protected. (50 words)
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continue to perish. I
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important
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preserve all languages.

On the one hand, when fewer
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languages
are in
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use
, communication tends to become easier
in most cases
. It will be
really
convenient if one can talk with others from various parts of the world without the need for a
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live
translator or special software for assistance. This means that
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different
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nations
around the globe are likely to be able to cooperate more
closely
if fewer
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languages
are in
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use
.
For instance
, a conference at the United
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Nations
will be more convenient and productive for politicians if they all can communicate using a limited set of
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languages
, or perhaps even one,
instead
of having to wait for translations to
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come
through.
Consequently
, better results are likely to
be achieved
more
quickly
, and
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many
issues could
be resolved
as a result
of better mutual understanding.

On the other hand
, every
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language
represents the culture within which it has developed. It reflects the lifestyle and traditions of the
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people
who
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use
it to communicate within the context of their daily
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lives
, and it is the foundation of their folklore and literature. Although
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some
might argue that these could
be translated
into more common
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languages
like English or Chinese, it is quite unlikely that the exact meaning of each phrase, expression, idiom, proverb or poem can
be translated
. This means that once a
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nations’
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language
has
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died
out, a significant portion of its culture and history
is lost
with it, leaving them with a weaker cultural and national identity.

In conclusion
, I believe
even though
the fall in the number of
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languages
in
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use
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allows
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people
to communicate more
conveniently
, making their
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lives
less complicated, it is
still
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important
for every
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language
to
be saved
from extinction
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so
that the culture, history and literature of all
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nations
are protected
. (50 words)
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. with this opinion v. 26

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
337 words
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Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
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  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
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