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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Model v.22

Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. with this opinion? Model v. 22
I disagree with the statement. Language is very important as it is the most important form of communication. Two people easily can understand and put across their thoughts. To decide whether a few languages are suffice or we need more languages is a debate by itself. In this essay we will talk about the statement's relevance in today's world. Easy life is least affected by languages. Every native speech is tied up with the identity of the race, culture and individual. In this world we have 195 countries and 6000 plus languages that are widely spoken. For example, in India alone, there are 22 dialects widely spoken. Moreover, each of these are associated with every state. In context to this Bengali is linked to the province West Bengal, Tamil is linked to the region Tamilnadu, Telugu is linked to the area Andhra Pradesh and so on. Additionally, every native speech is developing within the community. Furthermore, one cannot do away with this as it would equate to losing identities and stature in the society of the world. However, I feel fewer speeches and easy life, particularly has no correlation. This in fact is an amazing opportunity for people to learn new verses. Not only travelling can be exploited, but also learning new languages can be made a hobby. In general, the universe as such will become a better place to live with all the diversities. Another example of where the Minister of India wants to make Hindi as the official language in the country, this did not go too well with the mindset of the country. Finally, English should be the main language of the continent. Despite fewer languages, life will not be any easier. Consequently, the rest of the verses should be given equal respect and value. As a matter of fact, if a language dies, the culture goes along with it. In other words, let's not dilute the importance of the community speaking let all speeches exist.
I disagree with the statement.
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Language
is
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very
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important
as it is the most
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important
form of communication. Two
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people
easily
can understand and put across their thoughts. To decide whether a few
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languages
are
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suffice or
we need more
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languages
is a debate by itself. In this essay we will talk about the statement's relevance in
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today
's world. Easy life is least
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affected
by languages.

Every native
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speech
is tied
up with the identity of the race, culture and individual. In this world we have 195 countries and 6000 plus
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languages
that are
widely
spoken.
For example
, in India alone, there are 22 dialects
widely
spoken.
Moreover
, each of these
are associated
with every state. In context to this Bengali
is linked
to the province West Bengal, Tamil
is linked
to the region
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Tamilnadu
, Telugu
is linked
to the area Andhra Pradesh and
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so
on.
Additionally
, every native
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speech
is developing within the community.
Furthermore
, one cannot do away with this as it would equate to losing identities and stature in the society of the world.

However
, I feel fewer
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speeches
and easy life,
particularly
has no correlation. This in fact is an amazing opportunity for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
to learn new verses. Not
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only
travelling can
be exploited
,
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but
also
learning new
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languages
can
be made
a hobby.
In general
, the universe as such will become a better place to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
with all the diversities. Another example of where the Minister of India wants to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
Hindi as the official
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language
in the country, this did not go too well with the mindset of the country.

Finally
, English should be the main
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language
of the continent. Despite fewer
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languages
, life will not be any easier.
Consequently
, the rest of the verses should be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
equal respect and value. As a matter of fact, if a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
dies
, the culture goes along with it.
In other words
,
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let
's not dilute the importance of the community speaking
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
all
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speeches
exist.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
A different language is a different vision of life.
Federico Fellini

IELTS essay Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. with this opinion? Model v. 22

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
329 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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