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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. v.17

People have varying views about whether or not several languages should be left unused, and that a few vernacular is only significant in human existence. I completely agree to this idea that only a number of languages are beneficial in human existence terms of socio – economic aspects. Several contemporary languages globally are now becoming jeopardized due to the often and vivid utilization of few salient vernaculars, which have a dominant position in a social characteristic of persons’ lives. If one language is dominant, others may become extinct because it brings its own culture. The international language – English, for instance, its usage is increasingly widespread worldwide and it is identified as a global second language. As a result, it is a paramount in science, technology, and international businesses as their official language, which its application can be seen in global conferences and the most important textbooks are also made with this word. Thus, the ability to speak particular language is a necessary skill in the modern world. Another thing to consider with regard to this idea is in terms of countries economic development. Due to the increasing demand of financial crisis in impoverished countries, preserving several languages might not suffice their economical stand. A major percentages of countries to this date is enormously utilizing global brands to contribute to their gross national income, yet these multinational firms are only using certain languages to make operational around the globe. For example, the Philippine government is authorizing western establishments, such as schools to function in metropolises using their own language thereby allowing job opening and could help to salvage poverty in most nations. In conclusion, extinction of several languages might not a stumbling block to transform human lives at ease, because there are still some languages that are advantageous to forestall communication barrier and deprivation in our existence.
People
have varying views about whether or not several
languages
should be
left
unused, and that a few vernacular is
only
significant in human existence. I completely
agree
to this
idea
that
only
a number of
languages
are beneficial in human existence terms of socio – economic aspects.

Several contemporary
languages
globally are
now
becoming jeopardized due to the
often
and vivid utilization of few salient vernaculars, which have a dominant position in a social characteristic of persons’
lives
. If one
language
is dominant, others may become extinct
because
it brings its
own
culture. The international
language
– English,
for instance
, its usage is
increasingly
widespread worldwide and it
is identified
as a global second
language
.
As a result
, it is a paramount in science, technology, and international businesses as their official
language
, which its application can be
seen
in global conferences and the most
important
textbooks are
also
made with this word.
Thus
, the ability to speak particular
language
is a necessary
skill
in the modern world.

Another thing to consider with regard to this
idea
is in terms of countries economic development. Due to the increasing demand of financial crisis in impoverished countries, preserving several
languages
might not suffice their economical stand. A major percentages of countries to this date is
enormously
utilizing global brands to contribute to their gross national income,
yet
these multinational firms are
only
using certain
languages
to
make
operational around the globe.
For example
, the Philippine
government
is authorizing western establishments, such as schools to function in metropolises using their
own
language
thereby allowing job opening and could
help
to salvage poverty in most nations.

In conclusion
, extinction of several
languages
might not a stumbling block to transform human
lives
at
ease
,
because
there are
still
some
languages
that are advantageous to forestall communication barrier and deprivation in our existence.
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IELTS essay Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world? with this opinion.

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4 paragraphs
307 words
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