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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? v.14

Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. with this opinion? v. 14
Language is part of one's country culture. It speaks a thousand words to explain how important this is. First and foremost, language plays an important role everywhere. For example, there can be 1 to 700 dialects in a particular country and every one of them explains the culture of that region. Secondly, even there are hundreds of languages, we have the international language which is English. We can bring it anywhere we go. Moreover, there are several billions of people who studies, English as the second mother-tongue in the world. In the same way, people have choices, whether to study a specific mother-tongue or not. It all depends on someone's perspective. Thirdly, when there are fewer dialect in the world, life wouldn't be easier. People will still experience challenges in lifeblood that people experienced before when there are still a lot of languages. Admittedly, we cannot depend that generation will be easy to the fact that there are fewer languages. Life will still be hard whether we change everything or not. Therefore, I conclude that a mother-tongue is a great piece of a person's history. It is irresponsible to take that piece of them to a belief that an era will be easier with lesser languages. Life will be meaningful on how you face from your problems and solve it, because you won't learn anything if you run away from it. To sum up, even I study the most hardest language in the world, even I can't speak or understand for a long period of time, I won't give up because this words has a history. It is perfectly wonderful.
Language
is part of one's country culture. It speaks a thousand words to
explain
how
important
this is.

First
and foremost,
language
plays an
important
role everywhere.
For example
, there can be 1 to 700 dialects in a particular country and every one of them
explains
the culture of that region.

Secondly
, even there are hundreds of
languages
, we have the international
language
which is English. We can bring it anywhere we go.
Moreover
, there are several billions of
people
who studies, English as the second mother-tongue in the world.
In the same way
,
people
have choices, whether to study a specific mother-tongue or not. It all depends on someone's perspective.

Thirdly
, when there are fewer dialect in the world, life wouldn't be easier.
People
will
still
experience challenges in lifeblood that
people
experienced
before
when there are
still
a lot of
languages
.
Admittedly
, we cannot
depend
that generation will be easy to the fact that there are fewer
languages
. Life will
still
be
hard
whether we
change
everything or not.

Therefore
, I conclude that a mother-tongue is a great piece of a person's history. It is irresponsible to take that piece of them to a belief that an era will be easier with lesser
languages
. Life will be meaningful on how you face from your problems and solve it,
because
you won't learn anything if you run away from it. To sum up, even I study the
most hardest
language
in the world, even I can't speak or understand for a long period of time, I won't give up
because
this words has a history. It is
perfectly
wonderful.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. with this opinion? v. 14

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
270 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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