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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion. v.13

Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. with this opinion. v. 13
Many languages are being expired every year. Some people believe that a limited language is preferable for making life simple around the globe. However, I agree with those who believe that native language is related to own cultures and emotions, as well as learning multiple languages, it is an investment in our future. Firstly, each nation has its language, and this tongue belongs to internal identity. Our culture is intertwined with the tongue. Nowadays, communication is decreasing for many reasons. Thus, our culture is becoming narrower, and we cannot give the next generation an accurate idea of the literature. No one would like to speak in tongues other than their native language. To provide a strong example, in Bangladesh, many people have given their lives for the mother tongue on 21st February 1952, and they did not want to make another language their own. To every nation, their mother tongue is like a mother. Nonetheless, numerous country has tried to communicate through global language instead of mother tongue. To illustrate, in Singapore, older people speak in Malay, but the new generation communicates to others through English. Secondly, language is the best way to express one's mind, as well as it is an art. Although learning a new language is a big challenge, it has an optimistic impact on our future. To gain a new language and culture, people go to different countries. Besides, it assists in building up the tourism industry. They can share language, culture, and festivals. At present, knowing the various styles of the job is seen as a great skill. It helps to enhance the ability to multi-task and sharpens the mind. To sum up, language is the best media of communication. I believe that, the language of the country has sustained that country's culture. Furthermore, learning more tongue is a tremendous achievement too.
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languages
are
being expired
every year.
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Some
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people
believe that a limited
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language
is preferable for making life simple around the globe.
However
, I
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agree
with those who believe that native
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language
is related
to
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own
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cultures
and emotions,
as well
as learning multiple
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languages
, it is an investment in our future.

Firstly
, each nation has its
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
, and this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tongue
belongs to internal identity. Our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
culture
is intertwined
with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tongue
. Nowadays, communication is decreasing for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
reasons.
Thus
, our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
culture
is becoming narrower, and we cannot give the
next
generation an accurate
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
of the literature. No one would like to speak in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tongues
other than their native
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
. To provide a strong example, in Bangladesh,
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many
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people
have
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given
their
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lives
for the
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mother
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tongue
on 21st February 1952, and they did not want to
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make
another
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language
their
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own
. To every nation, their
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mother
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tongue
is like a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mother
. Nonetheless, numerous country has tried to communicate through global
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
instead
of
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mother
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tongue
. To illustrate, in Singapore, older
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people
speak in Malay,
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but
the new generation communicates to others through English.

Secondly
,
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language
is the best way to express one's mind,
as well
as it is an art. Although learning a new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
challenge, it has an optimistic impact on our future. To gain a new
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language
and
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culture
,
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people
go to
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different
countries.
Besides
, it assists in building up the tourism industry. They can share
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
culture
, and festivals. At present, knowing the various styles of the job is
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seen
as a great
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skill
. It
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helps
to enhance the ability to multi-task and sharpens the mind.

To sum up,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
is the best media of communication. I believe that, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
of the country has sustained that country's
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
culture
.
Furthermore
, learning more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tongue
is a tremendous achievement too.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
35Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. with this opinion. v. 13

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
307 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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