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The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009.

The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009.

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Overall Band Score: 5.5
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6
The response addresses the task but lacks depth in analysis and detail. Some key features are mentioned but not fully developed.
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6
The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks variety and precision. There are some spelling errors and awkward phrases.
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5.5
The text lacks clear logical flow and organization. Some sentences are disjointed, making it difficult to follow the argument.
Grammatical Range
5
There are several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb forms and punctuation issues. Sentence structures are often simple.

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