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The graph below show the number of universities graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007

The graph below show the number of universities graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007

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Overall Band Score: 7.5
Task Achievement
8
The task is effectively addressed with relevant details and clear task fulfillment, though the introduction could be more varied from the prompt.
Lexical Resource
7
The lexical range is adequate with some use of higher-level vocabulary, yet there is repetition of basic expressions.
Coherence & Cohesion
7.5
The text is effectively organized with a clear progression of ideas. However, the paragraph structure could be improved to enhance clarity.
Grammatical Range
7.5
The response demonstrates a good command of grammar, with a variety of sentence structures, though some constructions could be more complex.

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