The tremendous growth in the usage of the internet over the last two decades has led to radical changes to the way that people consume and share information. Although serious problems have arisen as a result of this.
One of the major problems with the internet is the ease with which children can access potentially dangerous sites. For example, pornography sites are easily accessible to them because they can register with a site and claim to be an adult. Beyond the shadow of a doubt that this affects their thoughts and development, which is a negative impact for children and for society. Another rising problem is the growth of online fraud and hacking. These days, there are constant news stories about government and company websites that have been hacked, resulting in sensitive information falling into the hands of criminals.
It is imperative that actions are taken to combat these problems. Governments should ensure that adequate legislations and controls are in place that will prevent young people from accessing dangerous sites, such as requiring more than simply confirming that you are an adult to view a site. Parents also have a part to play, they need to closely monitor the activities of their children and restrict their access to certain sites, which can now be done through various computer programmes. Companies must also improve IT security systems to avoid fraudulent schemes.
To conclude, the internet is an amazing technological innovation that has transformed people’s lives, but not without negative impacts. However, with the right action by individuals, governments and businesses, it can be made a safe place for everyone.
The tremendous growth in the usage of the internet over the last two decades has led to radical
changes
to the way that
people
consume and share information. Although serious
problems
have arisen
as a result
of this.
One of the major
problems
with the internet is the
ease
with which children can access
potentially
dangerous
sites
.
For example
, pornography
sites
are
easily
accessible to them
because
they can register with a
site
and claim to be an adult. Beyond the shadow of a doubt that this affects their thoughts and development, which is a
negative
impact for children and for society. Another rising
problem
is the growth of online fraud and hacking. These days, there are constant news stories about
government
and
company
websites that have
been hacked
, resulting in sensitive information falling into the hands of criminals.
It is imperative that actions
are taken
to combat these
problems
.
Governments
should ensure that adequate
legislations
and controls are in place that will
prevent
young
people
from accessing
dangerous
sites
, such as requiring more than
simply
confirming that you are an adult to view a
site
. Parents
also
have a part to play, they need to
closely
monitor the activities of their children and restrict their access to certain
sites
, which can
now
be done
through various computer
programmes
.
Companies
must
also
improve
IT security systems to avoid fraudulent schemes.
To conclude
, the internet is an amazing technological innovation that has transformed
people
’s
lives
,
but
not without
negative
impacts.
However
, with the right action by individuals,
governments
and businesses, it can
be made
a safe place for everyone.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes