Some individuals believe that it is necessarily important to motivate children to be more competitive to perform better. Yet, it seems to others that children, who are supplied (exposed) by the spirit of group-working, will be able to be more useful people in their life later than those who presume that competition is a priority. This essay will discuss both of these opinions through the following paragraphs.
First, citizens may think that the more competition someone faces, the faster the growth of his or her cognitive values would be. This idea can be a better consideration to boost and to explore people’s hemisphere to be more innovative in their lifetime as they are encouraged to be the first and have a passion for defeating other's idea. Being the best student in class, for instance, is one of the real examples. Students, who always get the first place, will try to maintain their position by expanding their competitiveness through study harder than others.
However, living in the real community, besides competitiveness, people are also required to be cooperative as their faith as social creatures that have to engage or be involved with other people to achieve a goal. Individuals, who can be a good cooperative people, are those who have been trained to do a team-work, moreover since their childhood rather than those who always competitive. My uncle, Rian, is a real figure. He is always involved in a community work and acts collaboratively with others because he used to do that since he was a little child and as the result, their goals are mostly achieved easier.
Someone who always excels in education and jobs is not necessarily a person with competitive mentality. Helpfulness and sharing with other expand the knowledge we gather. It is a good human quality to help other rather than competing. Children who are learned to share, often become better persons that those who always compete.
All in all, being competitive is considerably important to enhance knowledge, yet the communal life needs cooperative people as well. Thus, individuals are cordially suggested to balance both competitiveness and cooperativeness.
Some
individuals believe that it is
necessarily
important
to motivate children to be more
competitive
to perform better.
Yet
, it seems to others that children,
who
are supplied
(exposed) by the spirit of group-working, will be able to be more useful
people
in their life later than those
who
presume that competition is a priority. This essay will discuss both of these opinions through the following paragraphs.
First
, citizens may
think
that the more competition someone faces, the faster the growth of
his or her
cognitive values would be. This
idea
can be a better consideration to boost and to explore
people’s
hemisphere to be more innovative in their lifetime as they
are encouraged
to be the
first
and have a passion for defeating other's
idea
. Being the best student in
class
,
for instance
, is one of the real examples. Students,
who
always
get
the
first
place, will try to maintain their position by expanding their competitiveness through study harder than others.
However
, living in the real community,
besides
competitiveness,
people
are
also
required to be cooperative as their faith as social creatures that
have to
engage or
be involved
with
other
people
to achieve a goal. Individuals,
who
can be a
good
cooperative
people
, are those
who
have
been trained
to do a team-work,
moreover
since their childhood
rather
than those
who
always
competitive
. My uncle,
Rian
, is a real figure. He is always involved in a community work and acts
collaboratively
with others
because
he
used
to do that since he was a
little
child and as the result, their goals are
mostly
achieved easier.
Someone
who
always excels in education and jobs is not
necessarily
a person with
competitive
mentality. Helpfulness and sharing with
other
expand the knowledge we gather. It is a
good
human quality to
help
other
rather
than competing. Children
who
are learned
to share,
often
become better persons that those
who
always compete.
All in all, being
competitive
is
considerably
important
to enhance knowledge,
yet
the communal life needs cooperative
people
as well
.
Thus
, individuals are
cordially
suggested to balance
both competitiveness and cooperativeness.