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The graph below gives information on the number of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.

The graph below gives information on the number of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.

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Overall Band Score: 7
Task Achievement
7
The response addresses the task, identifies key trends, and uses data from the graph, though some details could be expanded.
Lexical Resource
7
The vocabulary is appropriate and varied, encompassing the key features and trends, though it could show more complexity.
Coherence & Cohesion
6.5
Overall, the essay clearly presents an overview and maintains coherence, but there are some abrupt transitions and a lack of varied cohesive devices.
Grammatical Range
6.5
The essay contains a range of sentence structures but repeats certain patterns, which limits variety.

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