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At the present time the population of some countries including a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

At the present time the population of some countries including a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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Conclusion
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Overall Band Score: 7.5
Task Achievement
7.5
The essay addresses the task effectively, presenting both advantages and disadvantages. However, the conclusion could be more definitive.
Lexical Resource
7
The vocabulary used is appropriate and varied, but there are instances of repetition and a lack of high-band vocabulary.
Coherence & Cohesion
7.5
The essay is generally well-structured, with clear progression of ideas. However, some transitions between points could be smoother.
Grammatical Range
7
The essay demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, but there are minor errors and some sentences could be more complex.

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