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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: * give contact details for when you are away; * give instructions on how to care for your pet; * describe other household duties;

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: * give contact details for when you are away; * give instructions on how to care for your pet; * describe other household duties;

academicLetterN/ AHouse Sitting
Writing Structure
Introduction
Simple Sentence

Simple Sentence

Body Paragraph 1
Complex Sentence

Complex Sentence

Body Paragraph 2
Simple Sentence

Compound Sentence

Body Paragraph 3
Simple Sentence

Complex Sentence

Body Paragraph 4
Complex Sentence

Compound Sentence

Conclusion
Simple Sentence

Simple Sentence

Simple Sentence

Overall Band Score: 8
Task Achievement
9
All task requirements are fully addressed, including contact details, pet care instructions, and household duties. The letter is clear and informative.
Lexical Resource
7
The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context, but there is some repetition of simple words. More varied vocabulary could enhance the letter.
Coherence & Cohesion
8
The letter is well-structured with clear sections for contact details, pet care instructions, and household duties. The flow of information is logical and easy to follow.
Grammatical Range
8
The letter demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, including complex sentences. However, there are minor punctuation errors.

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