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The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

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Overall Band Score: 6.5
Task Achievement
7
The response describes the key features with relevant comparisons, although some details could be better developed. Accurate data is generally provided.
Lexical Resource
6
The vocabulary used is sufficient for the task, with some variety, but could be expanded. There are repetitions of certain words, and some inaccuracies are present.
Coherence & Cohesion
6.5
The flow of the text is clear, though there are some issues with logical organization between sentences and within paragraphs. Transitions are not always smooth, and there is a bit of a disjointed feeling from one sentence to another.
Grammatical Range
6.5
There is a good mix of sentence structures employed, but with occasional grammatical errors, particularly with subject-verb agreement.

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