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A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend

A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend

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Dear Maryam, I hope you are doing well! Last morning I received your letter about the thinking of going on a camping holiday and read it. However, unfortunately, I can not respond your letter yesterday due to having a number of deadlines. In respond to your question I want to highlight that going on a camping holiday is a nice idea. You can spent useful and outstanding time on a camping holiday and enjoy the environment. There you can negotiate many new people, learn invaluable communication skills, and boost your networking. Considering that you are deep in law with socializing, you are getting cherry during camping holiday. Furthermore, you can stabling new natural places and discover animals that you have never seen. Looking through sightsee view, the sun which has a bright shine like a golden, green grass and separate type of trees, marvelous flowers, amazing river and lake, is felt like over the moon. Despite of these gorgeous environment, being there has a drawback. Last year I went there with my sister, and experienced living among nests. I just want to aware you since I know that you have a nest phobia. Also, that you for your invitation. I would like to join you dear Maryam but as I mentioned nowadays I have countless deadlines, and I should dealing with them. I hope next time we can going to the camping holiday and make unforgettable memories together. I wish you luck and hope you can amuse being there. Sincerely, Sama Jafarova
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Overall Band Score: 5.5
Task Achievement
6
The letter addresses the task but lacks depth in some areas. Key points are mentioned, but some details are vague.
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6
The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks variety and precision. Some phrases are awkward or incorrect.
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5.5
The letter has a basic structure but lacks clear organization. Ideas are somewhat jumbled, making it difficult to follow the flow of thoughts.
Grammatical Range
5
There are several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb forms and sentence structures. This affects clarity.

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