Some people say that the best way to improve public heath is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your own v.1
Some people say that the best way to improve public heath is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. 1
That is a common believe that one of the most important problems with the increasing world population is that of producing foods for a large number of people. As a solution, some human beings have some thoughts that GM foods (genetically modified foods) are valid for these issues. Actually, I disagree with this opinion due to special reasons.
First of all, I believe that genetically modified foods are unhealthy for people. GM foods – which is also called as genetically engineered foods – that their structures of DNA are changed by scientists. As GM foods are not beneficial for humans, they cause people have different diseases. In addition, their effects may create big problems while the person is not aware of those. One reason behind is this GM foods take part by not allowing people to live longer and healthier. As a result of this, it causes the decreasing of human race gradually, although it is said that expanding world population is a trouble on account of feeding them.
Furthermore, some people think that it is an advantage of GM foods being available in any season. It may facilitate their works, such as a cooking berry cake of berry lover in winter, however, it is a fact that eating vegetable or fruit in their own season is much more better than the other one. Moreover, genetically modified foods may give bad reactions in person, for example, they cause rash on the human body.
In conclusion, to my mind the thought of feeding the population with GM foods is not useful at all. People can think that is the best way, but that is exactly the end of the human race itself.
That is
a common believe that one of the most
important
problems with the increasing world population is that of producing
foods
for
a large number of
people
. As a solution,
some
human
beings have
some
thoughts that GM
foods
(
genetically
modified
foods)
are valid for these issues. Actually, I disagree with this opinion due to special reasons.
First of all
, I believe that
genetically
modified
foods
are unhealthy for
people
. GM
foods
–
which is
also
called as
genetically
engineered
foods
–
that their structures of DNA are
changed
by scientists. As GM
foods
are not beneficial for
humans
, they cause
people
have
different
diseases.
In addition
, their effects may create
big
problems while the person is not aware of those. One reason behind is this GM
foods
take part
by not allowing
people
to
live
longer and healthier.
As a result
of this, it causes the decreasing of
human
race
gradually
, although it
is said
that expanding world population is a trouble on account of feeding them.
Furthermore
,
some
people
think
that it is an advantage of GM
foods
being available in any season. It may facilitate their works, such as a cooking berry cake of berry lover in winter,
however
, it is a fact that eating vegetable or fruit in their
own
season is much
more better
than the other one.
Moreover
,
genetically
modified
foods
may give
bad
reactions in person,
for example
, they cause rash on the
human
body.
In conclusion
, to my mind the
thought
of feeding the population with GM
foods
is not useful at all.
People
can
think
that is
the best way,
but
that is
exactly the
end
of the
human
race itself.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes