Stepping into healthy society is one most debated issue these days. There are a number of people who believed public health will elevate by sport equipment. While, alternative thinkers are of the conviction that the effect of which is low and to increase public health we should use other measurements. This essay will elaborate on both views from a general perspective.
The first and probably the most significant reason for the first opinion is by seeing that equipment all over the town people will get motivated and do more exercises. So people are striving to achieve a healthy life when they go on a simple walk with their friends. For instance, I remember last week I was to walk with my friend in one the biggest public parks and was talking to each other by seeing sports facilities on the park we stopped by and start do some exercises. The day after that I felt so energetic I decide to indulge myself to one regular sport activity. Furthermore, the serotonin which release during the activities reduced the pressure and stresses away from me.
Regarding to next attitude, this is only temporary and people should attend some daily activities and measure their health and well-being. They should be careful about their diet and follow a nutritious. So, accompanying daily diet with a regular sport activity and systematic review measurement on a healthy diet will gain well- being and public health in the society.
In the light of these facts one can conclude that, it is important to balance sport activities and health diet to increase public health and well-being in society.
Stepping into healthy society is one most debated issue these days. There are a number of
people
who believed
public
health
will elevate by
sport
equipment. While, alternative thinkers are of the conviction that the effect of which is low and to increase
public
health
we should
use
other measurements. This essay will elaborate on both views from a general perspective.
The
first
and
probably
the most significant reason for the
first
opinion is by seeing that equipment all over the town
people
will
get
motivated and do more exercises.
So
people
are striving to achieve a healthy life when they go on a simple walk with their friends.
For instance
, I remember last week I was to walk with my friend in one the biggest
public
parks and was talking to each other by seeing
sports
facilities on the park we
stopped
by and
start
do
some
exercises. The day after that I felt
so
energetic I decide to indulge myself to one regular
sport
activity
.
Furthermore
, the serotonin which release during the
activities
reduced
the pressure and
stresses
away from me.
Regarding to
next
attitude, this is
only
temporary and
people
should attend
some
daily
activities
and measure their
health
and well-being. They should be careful about their diet and follow
a nutritious
.
So
, accompanying daily diet with a regular
sport
activity
and systematic review measurement on a healthy diet will gain well- being and
public
health
in the society.
In the light of these facts one can conclude that, it is
important
to balance
sport
activities
and
health
diet to increase
public
health
and well-being in society.
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