To improve public health some people suggest that the sports can play a vital role. It is said that “Healthy mind is in a Healthy body”. By increasing the number of sports facilities we can create an environment of courage, sportsmanship, and tolerance. The minds of youth can also be directed towards healthy activities through sports promotion.
However, some people believe that sports facilities alone are not sufficient to improve public health. There are many socio-economic factors that gravely affect the public health, such as water & sanitation, rampant population & pollution, lack of hygienic manners and social unrest. These factors need to be addressed to improve overall public health.
In my opinion, in a country like Pakistan, where people are living under the “shadow of fear” due to prevailing terrorism in the country we need a diverse approach. Speaking of flourishing poverty, inflation, and unemployment – availing sports facilities could be a luxury. And then there is a vast majority of areas deprived of basic health facilities, where one doctor is available for thousands of people. Sports can play a role but only if people are content with their lives.
There is a dire need for government to take solid actions to improve the general well-being of the people. Firstly, it must improve the security situation in the country to give peace of mind to the public. Secondly, it must improve water & sanitation system and must put a serious check on pollution increase and should take steps to reduce poverty, illiteracy and unemployment. Thirdly, the society must improve general hygiene level to have a positive impact on overall public health.
To
improve
public
health
some
people
suggest that the
sports
can play a vital role. It
is said
that “Healthy mind is in a Healthy body”. By increasing the number of
sports
facilities we can create an environment of courage, sportsmanship, and tolerance. The minds of youth can
also
be directed
towards healthy activities through
sports
promotion.
However
,
some
people
believe that
sports
facilities alone are not sufficient to
improve
public
health
. There are
many
socio-economic
factors that
gravely
affect the
public
health
, such as water & sanitation, rampant population & pollution, lack of hygienic manners and social unrest. These factors need to
be addressed
to
improve
overall
public
health.
In my opinion, in a country like Pakistan, where
people
are living under the “shadow of fear” due to prevailing terrorism in the country we need a diverse approach. Speaking of flourishing poverty, inflation, and unemployment
–
availing
sports
facilities could be a luxury. And then there is a vast majority of areas deprived of basic
health
facilities, where one doctor is available for thousands of
people
.
Sports
can play a role
but
only
if
people
are content with their
lives
.
There is a dire need for
government
to take solid actions to
improve
the general well-being of the
people
.
Firstly
, it
must
improve
the security situation in the country to give peace of mind to the
public
.
Secondly
, it
must
improve
water & sanitation system and
must
put a serious
check
on pollution increase and should take steps to
reduce
poverty, illiteracy and unemployment.
Thirdly
, the society
must
improve
general hygiene level to have a
positive
impact on
overall
public
health
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
30Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes