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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement?

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement?

essayopinionLanguage BarriersCultural Exchange
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Introduction
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Topic Sentence

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Supporting Sentence

Supporting Sentence

Body Paragraph 2
Topic Sentence

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Supporting Sentence

Supporting Sentence

Body Paragraph 3
Concluding Sentence

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Conclusion
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Final Thought

Overall Band Score: 5.5
Task Achievement
6
The essay addresses the task and presents a clear opinion. However, the development of ideas could be more thorough, and some points lack sufficient support.
Lexical Resource
5
The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and repetitive. There are several spelling errors and incorrect word forms that detract from the overall quality.
Coherence & Cohesion
5.5
The essay presents a clear argument but lacks smooth transitions between ideas and paragraphs. Some sentences are disjointed, affecting the overall flow.
Grammatical Range
5
The essay contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect punctuation and sentence structure. There is a lack of complex sentence structures.

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