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Many people feel it is a waste of money to try to save endangered animal species, for example the tiger or the blue whale. with this statement?

Many people feel it is a waste of money to try to save endangered animal species, for example the tiger or the blue whale. with this statement?

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Overall Band Score: 6.5
Task Achievement
6.5
The essay addresses the task and presents a clear opinion, but some arguments could be developed further. The conclusion summarizes the main points but lacks a strong final thought.
Lexical Resource
6
The vocabulary used is appropriate but lacks variety and sophistication. There are instances of repetition and some inaccuracies in word choice.
Coherence & Cohesion
6.5
The essay presents a clear argument with a logical structure, but some ideas could be better connected. The flow between sentences and paragraphs is generally good, but there are moments where transitions could be improved.
Grammatical Range
6
The essay demonstrates a reasonable range of grammatical structures, but there are errors in sentence construction and punctuation that affect clarity.

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