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Some people think the goverment is wasting money on arts and that this money could be spent elsewhere.

Some people think the goverment is wasting money on arts and that this money could be spent elsewhere.

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Introduction
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Body Paragraph 1
Topic Sentence

Supporting Sentence

Body Paragraph 2
Topic Sentence

Supporting Sentence

Conclusion
Restatement of Thesis

Overall Band Score: 5
Task Achievement
5
The essay addresses the task but does not fully develop the argument. Some points are underexplored, and the conclusion is weak.
Lexical Resource
5
The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and contains several spelling errors. There is an attempt to use topic-related vocabulary, but it lacks precision and variety.
Coherence & Cohesion
5
The essay presents a clear argument but lacks logical flow and organization. Ideas are not always well-connected, leading to some confusion.
Grammatical Range
4.5
There are numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement and punctuation issues. The sentence structures are mostly simple, lacking complexity.

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