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The line graph below shows the consumption of 4 kinds of meat in a European country from 1979 to 2004.

The line graph below shows the consumption of 4 kinds of meat in a European country from 1979 to 2004.

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Overall Band Score: 5
Task Achievement
5
The task response addresses some aspects of the graph but misses key details and provides an incomplete overview. The analysis lacks depth, and some significant data points are not covered or inaccurately described.
Lexical Resource
5
The lexical range is limited with frequent repetition and inappropriate word choices. Vocabulary lacks variety, and there are some inaccurate or awkward word usages.
Coherence & Cohesion
5.5
The writing is somewhat organized, but there are inconsistencies in paragraph structure and connection between ideas. Transitions are not smoothly executed, and there is a lack of clear logical progression.
Grammatical Range
5
Grammatical structures are basic, with limited use of complex sentences. There are several grammatical errors that affect clarity, such as incorrect tense use and subject-verb agreement issues.

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