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Check Your Text it's freeThe plans down show the scheme of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
academicMapMapRedevelopmentSports Facilities
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Compound Complex Sentence
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Body Paragraph 2
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Overall Band Score: 6.5
Task Achievement
6.5
The response identifies key features and changes but lacks detail in descriptions of future additions. The conclusion is omitted, reducing overall completeness.
Lexical Resource
6
The text uses a mix of appropriate vocabulary, but some word choices are informal or incorrect (e.g., "changing" instead of "changes"). There is repetition of basic vocabulary.
Coherence & Cohesion
6.5
The text generally follows a coherent structure, moving logically from present to future layouts. However, there are some unclear transitions, especially when discussing added facilities. The use of cohesive devices is inconsistent, which sometimes affects the flow.
Grammatical Range
6
The text showcases a range of sentence structures, but there are numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity. Incorrect conjunctions and missing articles are frequent.
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