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Check Your Text it's freeThe diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.
academicProcessProcessSugar ProductionSugar CaneManufacturing Process
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Introduction
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Overview
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Body Paragraph 1
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Body Paragraph 2
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Complex Sentence
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Simple Sentence
Overall Band Score: 6.5
Task Achievement
6.5
The response addresses the task and describes the process accurately. Certain aspects could be developed further for clarity and insight.
Lexical Resource
6.5
The vocabulary is adequate, although repetitive at times. Some errors in word choice but enough variety to convey meaning through task-related lexis.
Coherence & Cohesion
6.5
There is a logical sequence of ideas, and each step in the process is described in order, but the cohesion between sentences could be improved by using a wider variety of linking devices.
Grammatical Range
6
Simple and complex sentences present but with occasional errors in sentence structures. Grammatical range is somewhat limited.
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