Task Achievement
The task is understood and key features are described, but more comparative elements and data accuracy would improve the response.
Lexical Resource
The lexical range is somewhat limited, with frequent repetition of words like 'accommodation' and 'percentage.' Different terms could be used to convey the same meanings.
Coherence & Cohesion
The text is logically organized with a clear flow of information, separating owned and rented accommodations. However, transitions between points could be smoother, and there is a lack of connective phrases.
Grammatical Range
The text contains a variety of sentence structures but lacks complexity. Some sentences are overly simplistic, and punctuation errors are present.