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Check Your Text it's freeThe chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
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Overall Band Score: 6.5
Task Achievement
7
The task is understood and key features are described, but more comparative elements and data accuracy would improve the response.
Lexical Resource
6
The lexical range is somewhat limited, with frequent repetition of words like 'accommodation' and 'percentage.' Different terms could be used to convey the same meanings.
Coherence & Cohesion
6.5
The text is logically organized with a clear flow of information, separating owned and rented accommodations. However, transitions between points could be smoother, and there is a lack of connective phrases.
Grammatical Range
6
The text contains a variety of sentence structures but lacks complexity. Some sentences are overly simplistic, and punctuation errors are present.
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