Task Achievement
The essay addresses the topic but does not fully develop the argument. Some points are unclear or unsupported.
Lexical Resource
The vocabulary used is limited and often inaccurate. There are several spelling errors and awkward phrases that detract from the overall quality.
Coherence & Cohesion
The essay lacks a clear structure and logical flow. Ideas are not well connected, making it difficult for the reader to follow the argument.
Grammatical Range
There are numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement and sentence structure issues. The use of complex sentences is minimal.