There are a variety of songs out there which interest to people of all the age groups and places. However, I partially disagree with the statement because youngsters have entirely different taste in music. This essay will discuss both the sides with the relevant ideas and supporting examples.
There is no doubt that around the world listening to the rap has become a way to ease out the stress and frustration, despite the lyrics are in a foreign language. It is evident that it doesn’t concern people where the singing is originated from. Like, in India, people are inclined to listen to English songs, moreover, it is played in family functions and other occasions. Therefore, brings the sense of cultural value amongst the non natives.
On the other hand, due to the generation gap, the majority of the teenagers and adults are tempted to loud electronic sounds which elderly find repulsive to their ears. Senior citizens find classical and instrumental piece relatively soothing. For instance, a survey conducted in the UK showed that 96% of the people above 40 enjoy slow tracks. As a result, young people do not like to be the part of the older people’s parties.
In a nutshell, the melodies are always rejuvenating to everyone, it doesn’t matter where it came from, but it draws the line where certain age group has to choose the kind of melody they find fascinating.
There are a variety of songs out there which interest to
people
of all the age groups and places.
However
, I
partially
disagree with the statement
because
youngsters have
entirely
different
taste in music. This essay will discuss both the sides with the relevant
ideas
and supporting examples.
There is no doubt that around the world listening to the rap has become a way to
ease
out the
stress
and frustration, despite the lyrics are in a foreign language. It is evident that it doesn’t concern
people
where the singing
is originated
from. Like, in India,
people
are inclined
to listen to English songs,
moreover
, it
is played
in family functions and other occasions.
Therefore
, brings the sense of cultural value amongst the
non natives
.
On the other hand
, due to the generation gap, the majority of the
teenagers
and adults
are tempted
to loud electronic sounds which elderly find repulsive to their ears. Senior citizens find classical and instrumental piece
relatively
soothing.
For instance
, a survey conducted in the UK
showed
that 96% of the
people
above 40 enjoy slow
tracks
.
As a result
, young
people
do not like to be the part of the older
people’s
parties.
In a nutshell, the melodies are always rejuvenating to everyone, it doesn’t matter where it came from,
but
it draws the line where certain age group
has to
choose the kind of melody they find fascinating.
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6Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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