Music has been one of the fundamental entertainment since ages. A group of people believes that music can help unite people of various ages and cultures because of its influence among different age groups. In my opinion, I strongly believe that music is the only way to overcome barriers between people and will like to discuss my views.
Firstly, the influence music has over different cultures and its popularity and affinity among several age groups made it one of the primary keys in bringing people together. Moreover, the songs played in movies and television shows today is similar across many languages and regions across the world, helping ages of all groups to overcome the barrier of starting a conversation. For instance, a music event conducted by "Tomorrow Land" in Sweden has attracted thousands of people with various backgrounds from different parts of the world.
Secondly, unlike sports or any other events where fans of different teams can get into fights due to the outcome of the game. On the other hand, musical events do not have such kind of scenario and people are well aware of the taste of music they are going to listen to. To illustrate,
Many "Electronic Dance Music" events conduct around the world is played by several "Disk Jockeys" but the genres played in the event remains same.
In conclusion, no matter what the music is played it has many positive points in overcoming the barrier of getting people of several cultures and ages closer together.
Music
has been one of the fundamental entertainment since
ages
. A
group
of
people
believes that
music
can
help
unite
people
of various
ages
and cultures
because
of its influence among
different
age
groups
. In my opinion, I
strongly
believe that
music
is the
only
way to overcome barriers between
people
and will like to discuss my views.
Firstly
, the influence
music
has over
different
cultures and its popularity and affinity among several
age
groups
made it one of the primary keys in bringing
people
together.
Moreover
, the songs
played
in movies and television
shows
today
is similar across
many
languages and regions across the world, helping
ages
of all
groups
to overcome the barrier of starting a conversation.
For instance
, a
music
event
conducted by
"
Tomorrow Land
"
in Sweden has attracted thousands of
people
with various backgrounds from
different
parts of the world.
Secondly
, unlike sports or any other
events
where fans of
different
teams can
get
into fights due to the outcome of the game.
On the other hand
, musical
events
do not have such kind of scenario and
people
are well aware of the taste of
music
they are going to listen to. To illustrate,
Many
"
Electronic Dance Music
"
events
conduct around the world is
played
by several
"
Disk Jockeys
"
but
the genres
played
in the
event
remains same.
In conclusion
, no matter what the
music
is
played
it has
many
positive
points in overcoming the barrier of getting
people
of several cultures and
ages
closer together.
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