It is urged that music is an effective tool to unite people regardless of their cultural and generation background. This essay agrees with that statement because of the universal message shared through the music that any other way might not have. It will firstly outline in what way music can be an effective tool for uniting people. Then discuss the limitation that music has itself.
Music has the power to unite people effectively because of the universal message it has, such as love and peace. These two common topics are what human-being experienced and felt around whatever their background is. For example, The Beatles and Ed Sheeran are two of the most crowded music concerts that brings together people across the globe, mainly talks about love and peace.
However, not all music shares a mutually inclusive connection for its listeners. A few of them are also sometimes spread racism and shaming lyric that forces the listeners to not respect diversity. For example, just recently a famous singer in one of the Asian countries is reported by the mass public to spread racism from their second album.
In conclusion, despite there's a limitation as mentioned above, most of the music that we are listening to now is still content with the good message at the heart. This would be the right tool to unite all people regardless of their cultures and ages together.
It
is urged
that
music
is an effective tool to unite
people
regardless of their cultural and generation background. This essay
agrees
with that statement
because
of the universal message shared through the
music
that any other way might not have. It will
firstly
outline in what way
music
can be an effective tool for uniting
people
. Then discuss the limitation that
music
has itself.
Music has the power to unite
people
effectively
because
of the universal message it has, such as
love
and peace. These two common topics are what human-
being experienced
and felt around whatever their background is.
For example
, The Beatles and Ed Sheeran are two of the most crowded
music
concerts that brings together
people
across the globe,
mainly
talks about
love
and peace.
However
, not all
music
shares a
mutually
inclusive connection for its listeners. A few of them are
also
sometimes
spread racism and shaming lyric that forces the listeners to not respect diversity.
For example
,
just
recently a
famous
singer in one of the Asian countries
is reported
by the mass public to spread racism from their second album.
In conclusion
, despite there's a limitation as mentioned above, most of the
music
that we are listening to
now
is
still
content with the
good
message at the heart. This would be the right tool to unite all
people
regardless of their cultures and ages together.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes