It is often argued that music is an excellent measure of connecting people of distinct cultures and ages together. Personally, I completely agree with this view.
There are two main reasons why music has such enormous benefits. One reason is that, music performances are playing a vital role at every celebrations which are participated by people regardless of ages and origins. For instance, a lively show could create an energetic and comfortable atmosphere, accordingly, people could gather and integrate into the crowd. Furthermore, music is also an impressive sort of art, which could be appreciated by any person. To be more specific, people who have the same taste in music may gather together and share with each other their treasured pieces of music, therefore, they could make more acquaintances and tighten their bonding with others. Moreover, they could not only broaden their horizons by other countries’ music genre, but also have more knowledge about others’ cultures or languages.
Apart from the practical advantages that I expressed above, I still believe that there are some drawbacks hidden. Firstly, some sorts of music may not be suitable for every ages. In particular, rock n’ roll music has reached a wide audience, but the majority are teenagers and the youngsters, not the elderly people. As a result, old people may find that this genre of music is annoying and sometimes disturbing. Not to mention that the lyrics of a piece of music may contain misunderstandings or violent words. Accordingly, this may cause confusions and discomforts to the audiences. Moreover, the image of the music industry could also be threatened and damaged severely.
In conclusion, despite the adverse impacts that I have mentioned, advantages that music brings us outweigh the disadvantages.
It is
often
argued that
music
is an excellent measure of connecting
people
of distinct cultures and ages together.
Personally
, I completely
agree
with this view.
There are two main reasons why
music
has such enormous benefits. One reason is that,
music
performances are playing a vital role at every
celebrations
which
are participated
by
people
regardless of ages and origins.
For instance
, a lively
show
could create an energetic and comfortable atmosphere,
accordingly
,
people
could gather and integrate into the crowd.
Furthermore
,
music
is
also
an impressive sort of art, which could
be appreciated
by any person. To be more specific,
people
who have the same taste in
music
may gather together and share with each
other
their treasured pieces of
music
,
therefore
, they could
make
more acquaintances and tighten their bonding with others.
Moreover
, they could not
only
broaden their horizons by
other
countries’
music
genre,
but
also
have more knowledge about others’ cultures or languages.
Apart from the practical advantages that I expressed above, I
still
believe that there are
some
drawbacks hidden.
Firstly
,
some
sorts of
music
may not be suitable for every
ages
.
In particular
, rock n’ roll
music
has reached a wide audience,
but
the majority are
teenagers
and the youngsters, not the elderly
people
.
As a result
,
old
people
may find that this genre of
music
is annoying and
sometimes
disturbing. Not to mention that the lyrics of a piece of
music
may contain misunderstandings or violent words.
Accordingly
, this may cause confusions and discomforts to the audiences.
Moreover
, the image of the
music
industry could
also
be threatened
and damaged
severely
.
In conclusion
, despite the adverse impacts that I have mentioned, advantages that
music
brings us outweigh the disadvantages.