It is often said that music has a magical power to connect and unite people without any cultural backgrounds or generation barriers. I disagree with this and will demonstrate my opinion with two reasons: culture and age have a great influence on how people perceive it and the impact of music on the cohesion between the fan groups of different musical genres.
Audiences who do not come from one’s country or the same generation will be interested in other kinds of music because nationality affects its citizens which makes them familiar with some types of music rather than others. Old and young people are also affected by life’s experiences or lifestyle. For instance, Indian music which has a long story and many illogical episodes or the music came from the US with so many noisy sounds, up and down, both of them were hated by me - a Vietnamese.
The group, whose love with one musical genre will be isolated from another. Music fans just enjoy their music line, feel happy and relaxed when listening to that kind of music like country music fans, they are unfamiliar with rock music, noise music instruments or beat too fast. For example, I fall in love with country music and enjoy bolero, but I have to listen to nursery rhymes which my nephew prefers because taking care of him when his parents got out is my responsibility. It makes me tired and stressed, so I do not want to be beside him anymore, each time.
In conclusion, I believe that music is powerful and magical in connecting people, but depending on their music style.
It is
often
said that
music
has a magical power to connect and unite
people
without any cultural backgrounds or generation barriers. I disagree with this and will demonstrate my opinion with two reasons: culture and age have a great influence on how
people
perceive it and the impact of
music
on the cohesion between the fan groups of
different
musical genres.
Audiences who do not
come
from one’s country or the same generation will
be interested
in other kinds of
music
because
nationality affects its citizens which
makes
them familiar with
some
types of
music
rather
than others.
Old
and young
people
are
also
affected
by life’s experiences or lifestyle.
For instance
, Indian
music
which has a long story and
many
illogical episodes or the
music
came from the US with
so
many
noisy sounds, up and down, both of them
were hated
by me
-
a Vietnamese.
The group, whose
love
with one musical genre will
be isolated
from another.
Music
fans
just
enjoy their
music
line, feel happy and relaxed when listening to that kind of
music
like country
music
fans, they are unfamiliar with rock
music
, noise
music
instruments or beat too
fast
.
For example
, I fall in
love
with country
music
and enjoy bolero,
but
I
have to
listen to nursery rhymes which my nephew prefers
because
taking care of him when his parents
got
out is my responsibility. It
makes
me tired and
stressed
,
so
I do not want to be beside him anymore, each time.
In conclusion
, I believe that
music
is powerful and magical in connecting
people
,
but
depending on their
music
style.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
19Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes