Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. v.28
Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. v. 28
Nowadays, people choose their jobs according to their comfort, while some choose according to salary. It is true that some people accept bad situation because of their comfort, while others think that it is better to improve this situation. According to my viewpoint, I totally agree with second situation.
Firstly, there are many human beings who are working in a company with lower salaries and also not satisfied with their job because they are working in different departments in which they did not have interests. For example, there are many graduated students who find companies to work and fulfil their needs, whether their companies are provide satisfied position or not. On the other hand, there are many people who are happy with their unsatisfactory job because of their comfort and fixed salary. For example, there are many people who are working in the small organisation which they did not feel any pressure.
Secondly, some people think that it is better to improve bad situations. There are many graduated students who find their jobs after graduation in different department because they find comfortable, but they have to find their job in the same department, so that they are happy with their position and performed very well. For example, a person who completed their graduation in the computer field and also find their job in the computer field, so they are fully satisfied with their job.
To conclude, there are many people who believe that it is better to accept a bad situation because of their comfort, but according to my viewpoint, it is better to improve such things like find job in your own field so that you are fully satisfied and perform very well.
Nowadays,
people
choose their
jobs
according
to their
comfort
, while
some
choose
according
to salary. It is true that
some
people
accept
bad
situation
because
of their
comfort
, while others
think
that it is
better
to
improve
this
situation
.
According
to my viewpoint, I
totally
agree
with second situation.
Firstly
, there are
many
human beings
who
are working in a
company
with lower salaries and
also
not
satisfied
with their
job
because
they are working in
different
departments in which they did not have interests.
For example
, there are
many
graduated students
who
find
companies
to work and fulfil their needs, whether their
companies
are
provide
satisfied
position or not.
On the other hand
, there are
many
people
who
are happy with their unsatisfactory
job
because
of their
comfort
and
fixed
salary.
For example
, there are
many
people
who
are working in the
small
organisation
which they did not feel any pressure.
Secondly
,
some
people
think
that it is
better
to
improve
bad
situations
. There are
many
graduated students
who
find
their
jobs
after graduation in
different
department
because
they
find
comfortable,
but
they
have to
find
their
job
in the same department,
so
that they are happy with their position and performed
very
well.
For example
, a person
who
completed their graduation in the computer field and
also
find
their
job
in the computer field,
so
they are
fully
satisfied
with their job.
To conclude
, there are
many
people
who
believe that it is
better
to accept a
bad
situation
because
of their
comfort
,
but
according
to my viewpoint, it is
better
to
improve
such things like
find
job
in your
own
field
so
that you are
fully
satisfied
and perform
very
well.
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46Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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