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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v.6

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 6
Today, the amount of household and industrial waste is rising substantially at an alarming rate, which is probably the greatest threat to the environment. This essay will shed some light on the main cause of the problem, and will also suggest a viable solution to tackle with this situation effectively. To begin with, increasing use of non-biodegradable packaging materials, such as plastics, metals, and glass, are the main reason for the excessive amount of trash production. Food and beverage companies use plastics intensively as a main packaging material for final products in order to attract consumers’ attention. As a result, they not only pollute the environment, but also affect negatively to the public health. For example, the average UK household uses approximately 480 plastic bottles per year; however, only about 270 of them were recycled. Obviously, there are not simple solutions to dispose of solid waste; thus, government needs to apply some strict regulation to reduce such waste. With the use of taxes, government could reduce the market demand for plastics. If tax authority raises taxes on such products, the equilibrium price will go up immediately; hence, the demand in the market might reduce in the short run. For instance, in 2012 the German government doubled the tax rate that is levied on plastic materials; therefore, the price has tripled since 2012. Despite the fact that some governments use same policy, the final result is not always successful. In conclusion, government should imply high tax rate on the materials that is not easily decompose in order to encourage residents and local companies to use more environmentally friendly products; otherwise, such products will harm and pollute the environment, and it might be a world-wide problem in the near future.
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Today
, the amount of household and industrial waste is rising
substantially
at an alarming rate, which is
probably
the greatest threat to the environment. This essay will shed
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some
light on the main cause of the problem, and will
also
suggest a viable solution to tackle with this situation
effectively
.

To
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begin
with, increasing
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use
of non-biodegradable packaging
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materials
, such as
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plastics
, metals, and glass, are the main reason for the excessive amount of trash production. Food and beverage
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companies
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use
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plastics
intensively
as a main packaging
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material
for final
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products
in order to attract consumers’ attention.
As a result
, they not
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only
pollute the environment,
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but
also
affect
negatively
to the public health.
For example
, the average UK household
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uses
approximately 480
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plastic
bottles per year;
however
,
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only
about 270 of them
were recycled
.

Obviously
, there are not simple solutions to dispose of solid waste;
thus
,
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government
needs to apply
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some
strict regulation to
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reduce
such waste. With the
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use
of
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taxes
,
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government
could
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reduce
the market demand for
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plastics
. If
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tax
authority raises
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taxes
on such
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products
, the equilibrium price will go up immediately;
hence
, the demand in the market might
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reduce
in the short run.
For instance
, in 2012 the German
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government
doubled the
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tax
rate that
is levied
on
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plastic
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materials
;
therefore
, the price has tripled since 2012. Despite the fact that
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some
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governments
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use
same policy, the final result is not always successful.

In conclusion
,
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government
should imply high
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tax
rate on the
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materials
that is
not
easily
decompose in order to encourage residents and local
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companies
to
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use
more
environmentally
friendly
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products
;
otherwise
, such
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products
will harm and pollute the environment, and it might be a world-wide problem in the near future.
16Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS essay Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 6

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
288 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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