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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v.5

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 5
The increasing air pollution and garbage production in the last three decades has a tremendous effect on our planet. There are many social reasons explaining this growing problem and the government should take strong actions in order to reverse these changes. In the following essay, I will explain what are, in my opinion, the main reasons for the increased rubbish production, and what are the possible solutions. Changes in social habbits are, in my opinion, the main reason why people produce more garbage nowadays. First, people nowadays tend to buy new things at a faster rate and discard old products. While in previous years, people would repair electrical machinary, such as televisions and phones, and use it well over ten years, today these products are being replaced after two years in average. This social change, according to the Israeli government resulted in the fact that electrical machinary comprise 20% of the annual garbage production. Second, increased use plastic materials have become increasingly popular in the wetern society over the last 20 years. This undegradable product has become the most common garbage material wordlwide according the United Nations, and represents the leading cause of ocean pollution. Last, commersials broadcasted throughout the social media influence young people to buy more products, such as cloths and different accessories which further increase garbage production. As a result of the above mentioned social changes, the government can take several steps in order to save our planet. Initially, through legislation, the government can reduce the use of plastic and single use materials. This has been done in Canada recently, which reduced the annual garbage production by 10%. Also, the government can promote the use of recycled products such as bottles, clothes and papers. Last, educational programs to teach children about the importance of recycling and reducing garbage production can have a massive effect on the overall environmental pollution. In conclusion, I believe that social changes such as the use of plastics materials, as well as buying new products instead of fixing it, are the main reasons for the increased rubbish production. This can be prevented through government legislation, increased recycling and educational programms. We should take drastic steps to save our planet.
The increasing air pollution and garbage
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in the last three decades has a tremendous effect on our planet. There are
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social
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reasons
explaining this growing problem and the
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government
should take strong actions in order to reverse these
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changes
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explain
what are, in my opinion, the main
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increased
rubbish
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production
, and what are the possible solutions.

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Changes
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why
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produce more garbage nowadays.
First
,
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nowadays tend to
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buy
new things at a faster rate and discard
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old
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products
. While in previous years,
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would repair electrical
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machinary
, such as televisions and phones, and
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it well over ten years,
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today
these
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products
are
being replaced
after two years in average. This
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social
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change
, according to the Israeli
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resulted in the fact that electrical
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machinary
comprise 20% of the annual garbage
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production
. Second,
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increased
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use
plastic
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have become
increasingly
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society over the last 20 years. This
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undegradable
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has become the most common garbage
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material
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wordlwide
according the United Nations, and represents the leading cause of ocean pollution. Last,
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commersials
broadcasted throughout the
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media influence young
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people
to
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buy
more
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products
, such as cloths and
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different
accessories which
further
increase garbage production.

As a result
of the above mentioned
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social
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changes
, the
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government
can take several steps in order to save our planet.
Initially
, through legislation, the
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government
can
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reduce
the
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of plastic and single
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use
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materials
. This has
been done
in Canada recently, which
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reduced
the annual garbage
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production
by 10%.
Also
, the
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government
can promote the
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use
of recycled
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products
such as bottles, clothes and papers. Last, educational programs to teach children about the importance of recycling and reducing garbage
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production
can have a massive effect on the
overall
environmental pollution.

In conclusion
, I believe that
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social
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changes
such as the
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of plastics
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materials
,
as well
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products
instead
of fixing it, are the main
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reasons
for the
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increased
rubbish
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production
. This can be
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prevented
through
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government
legislation,
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recycling and educational
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programms
. We should take drastic steps to save our planet.
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IELTS essay Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 5

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
366 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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