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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v.37

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 37
Rubbish simply refers to waste production, which is a severe issue for the whole world due to recent environmental degradations, pollution and global warming. The reason behind the increasing garbage production and some measures to improve the overall situation will be discussed in this essay. There are a couple of reasons, in my mind, behind the increase in waste production in recent years. First, the uncontrollable use of non-decomposable carriers (eg. plastics and polythene) is one of the top-most causes of excessive waste production. Plastics is a bigger concern and it is being preferred more than ever for packaging or bottling certain products, especially in the food and beverage industries. Besides, the incognizance of citizen is playing its part undoubtedly. We are being used to a throwaway culture rather than using recycling products. This is leading to the preferences of companies to produce one-time products which are eventually increasing more and more waste production. To reduce waste production and to save the environment, governments in all countries have to play a bigger role than they are actually playing. The government should legislate strict laws to enforce companies to use decomposable packaging materials. Assistance from the judicial system can be a good move. For example, the mobile courts led by licensed magistrates can fine those whoever does not comply with the law. The government should also encourage people and manufacturers to take part in recycling and reusing products whenever applicable. Restaurants and fast-food shops should offer a discount on food and drink items when customers return the packaging bottles or packets that were made of plastics. Such kinds of initiatives should be appreciated by authority. In conclusion, the government, as well as the manufacturers, need to be more focused on the consequence of massive waste production, therefore stepping forward to apply possible measures can reduce the growing concern.
Rubbish
simply
refers to
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waste
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production
, which is a severe issue for the whole world due to recent environmental
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degradations
, pollution and global warming. The reason behind the increasing garbage
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production
and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
measures to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
the
overall
situation will
be discussed
in this essay.

There are a couple of reasons, in my mind, behind the increase in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
production
in recent years.
First
, the uncontrollable
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of non-decomposable carriers (
The abbreviation "e.g." (= for example) requires two periods.
eg.
plastics and polythene) is one of the top-most causes of excessive
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
production
. Plastics is a bigger concern and it is
being preferred
more than ever for packaging or bottling certain
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
,
especially
in the food and beverage industries.
Besides
, the
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incognizance
of citizen is playing its part
undoubtedly
. We are being
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to a throwaway culture
rather
than using recycling
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
. This is leading to the preferences of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
to produce one-time
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
which are
eventually
increasing more and more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
production.

To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
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waste
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
production
and to save the environment,
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governments
in all countries
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
play a bigger role than they are actually playing. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
should legislate strict laws to enforce
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
decomposable packaging materials. Assistance from the judicial system can be a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
.
For example
, the mobile courts led by licensed magistrates can fine those whoever does not comply with the law. The
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government
should
also
encourage
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
and manufacturers to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
take part
in recycling and reusing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
whenever applicable. Restaurants and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
-food shops should offer a discount on food and drink items when customers return the packaging bottles or packets that
were made
of plastics. Such kinds of initiatives should
be appreciated
by authority.

In conclusion
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
,
as well
as the manufacturers, need to be more focused on the consequence of massive
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
production
,
therefore
stepping forward to apply possible measures can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the growing concern.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 37

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
307 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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