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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.35

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 35
In today's world, the environment is deeply affected by disposal wastes and sometimes it causes hazard effects on human which create various health problems. I personally feel that the growth of manufacturing industry is the main reason behind this issue. For controlling this defect, the regime should promote certain restriction and instruction to curb the amount of misuse-produce material. So, the following paragraphs will discuss both views comprehensively. In a trendy society, the population growth is the one of the main reasons to help the manufacture to produce more industrial misuse products. This is because when the people's ratio getting more, the essential things are also needed considerably. For that reason, the manufacturing units become more approachable to the society. To illustrate with an example, currently, in India, approximately more than 10, 000 elastic manufacturing factories are located in every region, so the waste generation process is increased due to producing the oodles quantity of plastic products. This cause considerable adverse effect on society, so recycling is the only way to prevent the producing large quantity of hazardous waste products. On the contrary, the law should arrange some restriction and limitation to control this issue and also bring various awareness programs to educate people greatly. By doing this, it will encourage people to aware about the social drawbacks and motivate them to participate as a volunteer. Moreover, the strict activity is required for every factory to control the release waste product. For example, the government should deal with heavy taxes on plastic manufacturing units to limit the production level, at the same time, they should recommend recycling method to straighten the product manufacturing limit. Another important considerable point is that instead of using plastic bags, approaches nylon or waste-newspaper bags to reuse and safe the environment healthy. In conclusion, although there are various adverse effects of producing waste-generate products, I believed that the severe action taken by the government will assuage the problems with ease. Strict action among people is the only plausible solution to tackle the problems greatly.
In
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today
's world, the environment is
deeply
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affected
by disposal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wastes
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
it causes hazard effects on human which create various health problems. I
personally
feel that the growth of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
manufacturing
industry is the main reason behind this issue. For controlling this defect, the regime should promote certain restriction and instruction to curb the amount of misuse-produce material.
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So
, the following paragraphs will discuss both views
comprehensively
.

In a trendy society, the population growth is the one of the main reasons to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
the manufacture to produce more industrial misuse
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
. This is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
when the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
's ratio getting more, the essential things are
also
needed
considerably
. For that reason, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
manufacturing
units become more approachable to the society. To illustrate with an example,
currently
, in India, approximately more than 10, 000 elastic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
manufacturing
factories
are located
in every region,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
generation process
is increased
due to producing the oodles quantity of plastic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
. This cause considerable adverse effect on society,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
recycling is the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
way to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
prevent
the producing large quantity of hazardous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
products.

On the contrary
, the law should arrange
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
restriction and limitation to control this issue and
also
bring various awareness programs to educate
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
greatly
. By doing this, it will encourage
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
to aware about the social drawbacks and motivate them to participate as a volunteer.
Moreover
, the strict activity
is required
for every factory to control the release
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
.
For example
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should deal with heavy taxes on plastic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
manufacturing
units to limit the production level, at the same time, they should recommend recycling method to straighten the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
manufacturing
limit. Another
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
considerable point is that
instead
of using plastic bags, approaches nylon or waste-newspaper bags to reuse and safe the environment healthy.

In conclusion
, although there are various adverse effects of producing waste-generate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
, I believed that the severe action taken by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
will assuage the problems with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ease
. Strict action among
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
If 'people' is plural here, don't use the third-person singular verb.
is
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
plausible solution to tackle the problems
greatly
.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
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IELTS essay Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 35

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
339 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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