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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v.34

Waste is becoming most concerned issue in now a days. There is no doubt that we are producing more rubbish than every day before. And we are still not focusing to overcome this problem beacause people are using more disposalable. Further, I am going to discuss about the causes of rubbish and how can we tackle this problem. Firstly, the vital reason of litter is the factories where they are producing more unwanted products like the plastic which is totally un-biodegradeable. There are many others things which are also helping to increase the level of waste like, eating more fast food than eating at home because fast food is always consuming in recyclable material. The companies those are making waste are polluting the envionment in the form of water and air pollution are aslo quiet dangerous for us. Secondly, while using recyclable products we do not understanding the coming conditions of our livings which can make our existence difficult due to all impacts of rubbish. We should start using the metals and wooden materials than the plastic. Governments should impose some strict regulations to stop making garbage to make surrowndings healthy and safe. Like they can limit the use and production of plastic and helps people to find alternative of plastic. Authority can also assign some heavy fine for industries for making water contaminated with their litter. Lastly, I would like to say that it's not only one person's duty to decrease the production of garbage. This can be only possible if we all start to worry about environment.
Waste is becoming most concerned issue in
now a days
. There is no doubt that we are producing more rubbish than every day
before
. And we are
still
not focusing to overcome this problem
beacause
people
are using more
disposalable
.
Further
, I am going to
discuss about the
causes of rubbish and how can we tackle this problem.

Firstly
, the vital reason of litter is the factories where they are producing more unwanted products like the plastic which is
totally
un-biodegradeable
. There are
many
others things which are
also
helping to increase the level of waste like, eating more
fast
food than eating at home
because
fast
food is always consuming in recyclable material. The
companies
those are making waste are polluting the
envionment
in the form of water and air pollution are
aslo
quiet
dangerous
for us.

Secondly
, while using recyclable products we do not
understanding
the coming conditions of our livings which can
make
our existence difficult due to all impacts of rubbish. We should
start
using the metals and wooden materials than the plastic.

Governments
should impose
some
strict regulations to
stop
making garbage to
make
surrowndings
healthy and safe. Like they can limit the
use
and production of plastic and
helps
people
to find alternative of plastic. Authority can
also
assign
some
heavy fine for industries for making water contaminated with their litter.

Lastly
, I would like to say that it's not
only
one person's duty to decrease the production of garbage. This can be
only
possible if we all
start
to worry about environment.
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IELTS essay : Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
259 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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