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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.32

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 32
Generally speaking, mankind's evolution has its advantages and disadvantages since ever. While all the advancements in most of the life's domains, especially industry and technology, have progressed the world from the stone age to the civilization era. However, they have entailed a lot of consequences which have impacted our eco-system badly. The most important one is trash with all its relative types and kinds. This is a major issue which raises important concerns like the causes of such undesirable outcomes, which I am briefing below, and also it requires our utmost attention to take the proper initiatives, such as the ones I'll be suggesting, to prevent or heavily reduce their effects on our countries and beloved earth. The first player that started this and the most important contributor was the industrial revolution which was the biggest breakthrough that human beings have attained. While it has brought so many state of the art products into our lives like electricity, cars, and planes, it has also generated a lot of unfavourable rubbish such as burnt motor oils, used lubricants, smoke and harmful gases emerging from factories, and industrial waste. For example, our power plant in Lebanon is satisfying a large geographical area with the energy needed, but studies revealed that has caused so much damage to the environment that most of our marine life has vanished in that spot. Therefore, with so many factories and power plants being developed, so much harm is being generated which has now crossed so many thresholds relative to our eco-system. With all what has been presented, governments must take these alarming concerns into consideration and should implement drastic measures to try to salvage what has survived of our nature. Recycling laws and regulations must be enforced on the public in all domains to promote classification of our rubbish and to utilize as much as we can our current products with limits on producing more. Reusable eco-friendly bags' campaigns should be engineered and executed to distribute them to the customers for shopping malls and increase green shopping awareness and market recycled merchandise. For example, the state of Abu Dhabi has started an initiative, back in 2017, to provide recycling trash cans in the residential building along with the free of charge pick up service, given that all the inhabitants would classify their wastes as per the guided labels. Finally, adopting these practices would aid in reducing the impact of all unwanted effects on our lives in the future. In conclusion, governments and citizens should start, themselves, developing the right methods to produce more and more green and environmentally friendly goods in order to preserve as much as they can our natural habitat and deliver it safely to the next generations.
Generally
speaking, mankind's evolution has its advantages and disadvantages since ever. While all the advancements in most of the life's domains,
especially
industry and technology, have progressed the world from the
stone age
to the civilization era.
However
, they have entailed
a lot of
consequences which have impacted our
eco-system
badly
. The most
important
one is trash with all its relative types and kinds. This is a major issue which raises
important
concerns like the causes of such undesirable outcomes, which I am briefing below, and
also
it requires our utmost attention to take the proper initiatives, such as the ones I'll be suggesting, to
prevent
or
heavily
reduce
their effects on our countries and beloved earth.

The
first
player that
started
this and the most
important
contributor was the industrial revolution which was the biggest breakthrough that human beings have attained. While it has brought
so
many
state of the art
products into our
lives
like electricity, cars, and
planes
, it has
also
generated
a lot of
unfavourable
rubbish such as burnt motor oils,
used
lubricants, smoke and harmful gases emerging from factories, and industrial waste.
For example
, our power plant in Lebanon is satisfying a large geographical area with the energy needed,
but
studies revealed that has caused
so
much
damage to the environment that most of our marine life has vanished in that spot.
Therefore
, with
so
many
factories and power plants
being developed
,
so
much
harm is
being generated
which has
now
crossed
so
many
thresholds relative to our
eco-system
.

With all what has
been presented
,
governments
must
take these alarming concerns into consideration and should implement drastic measures to try to salvage what has survived of our nature. Recycling laws and regulations
must
be enforced
on the public in all domains to promote classification of our rubbish and to utilize as
much
as we can our
current
products with limits on producing more. Reusable eco-friendly bags' campaigns should
be engineered
and executed to distribute them to the customers for shopping malls and increase green shopping awareness and market recycled merchandise.
For example
, the state of Abu Dhabi has
started
an initiative, back in 2017, to provide recycling trash cans in the residential building along with
the free of
charge pick up service,
given
that all the inhabitants would classify their wastes as per the guided labels.
Finally
, adopting these practices would aid in reducing the impact of all unwanted effects on our
lives
in the future.

In conclusion
,
governments
and citizens should
start
, themselves, developing the right methods to produce more and more green and
environmentally
friendly
goods
in order to preserve as
much
as they can our natural habitat and deliver it
safely
to the
next
generations.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 32

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
453 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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